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Adorned

white downy clouds adorn Table Mountain; wind is going to blow today

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 11/19/2010 6:44:00 AM

What change shall the white clouds bring? What change? Will the dunes be blown away? Endlessly, Wilma you inspire me ... another poem again.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/18/2010 2:01:00 PM

and smiles go with those clouds! sure would love to visit Table Mountain someday :) hugs to you

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2010 7:37:00 PM

Super visual lines so brilliantly presented Wilma dear friend.. our wind is blowing right now into tomorrow it seems.. spectacular Monoku luv.. be blessed this happy day with luv..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/15/2010 4:10:00 AM

Hey Wilma! Ek hoop dat jy 'n goeie tyd is om! I can see the white cloads covering the Table Mountain in this Monoku!!! It must be a wonderful sight!..Al die beste, Wilma en 'n lekker week wat voorlê! ....Gert :)

James Fraser

Date: 11/14/2010 11:50:00 AM

And what a mountain it is Wilma, lovely piece >> James :)

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/12/2010 10:51:00 AM

You paint a picture and a character that knows the way the world works:)

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/11/2010 9:27:00 AM

Hope it is a refreshing wind. Nice monoku Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/11/2010 4:42:00 AM

Its has been breezy here for the past few days, a lovely short form... way to expand your work in another form.. Enjoyed my dear...Love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2010 3:51:00 PM

Cool one, Wilma. Is this a mountain in your area?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2010 2:47:00 PM

A lot said in this short line..It hasn't gotten that bad here yet..Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 11/10/2010 1:20:00 PM

I like the table mountain - gives good image. Love,Dave

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 11/10/2010 10:25:00 AM

heart pulsing with one big amazing view" Love it ( Lin~RA )

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/10/2010 9:35:00 AM

Wilma, Tthe visual on this is remarkable, I love it As ALways, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2010 8:09:00 AM

What a vivid image you give us of this mountain. Wish I could visit it to see the "white downy clouds." Great monoku, Wilma! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 11/10/2010 7:52:00 AM

Fantastic Monoku dear poet ! Brrrrrr...effective write Wilma ! much love, james

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/10/2010 7:14:00 AM

Hey Wilma, I find it so amazing how nature always lets us know what she's up to. Our ancestors had no choice but to observe and they managed as best they could. Beautiful picture presented here with the Monoku! Love, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/10/2010 6:31:00 AM

sounds pretty

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/10/2010 6:21:00 AM

You have defined the "adorned" with nice images,