Adorned

white downy clouds adorn Table Mountain; wind is going to blow today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Shango Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 6:44 AM
What change shall the white clouds bring? What change? Will the dunes be blown away? Endlessly, Wilma you inspire me ... another poem again.
K. Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 2:01 PM
and smiles go with those clouds! sure would love to visit Table Mountain someday :) hugs to you
Sweetheart Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 7:37 PM
Super visual lines so brilliantly presented Wilma dear friend.. our wind is blowing right now into tomorrow it seems.. spectacular Monoku luv.. be blessed this happy day with luv..
Knop Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Hey Wilma! Ek hoop dat jy 'n goeie tyd is om! I can see the white cloads covering the Table Mountain in this Monoku!!! It must be a wonderful sight!..Al die beste, Wilma en 'n lekker week wat voorlê! ....Gert :)
Fraser Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 11:50 AM
And what a mountain it is Wilma, lovely piece >> James :)
Harper Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 10:51 AM
You paint a picture and a character that knows the way the world works:)
Anish Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Hope it is a refreshing wind. Nice monoku Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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November 11, 2010 at 4:42 AM
Its has been breezy here for the past few days, a lovely short form... way to expand your work in another form.. Enjoyed my dear...Love Michael
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 3:51 PM
Cool one, Wilma. Is this a mountain in your area?
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 2:47 PM
A lot said in this short line..It hasn't gotten that bad here yet..Sara
Austin Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 1:20 PM
I like the table mountain - gives good image. Love,Dave
Ammutlinra Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 10:25 AM
heart pulsing with one big amazing view" Love it ( Lin~RA )
Ruebel Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 9:35 AM
Wilma, Tthe visual on this is remarkable, I love it As ALways, Shar
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 8:09 AM
What a vivid image you give us of this mountain. Wish I could visit it to see the "white downy clouds." Great monoku, Wilma! Love, Carolyn
Peranteau Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Fantastic Monoku dear poet ! Brrrrrr...effective write Wilma ! much love, james
Haick Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 7:14 AM
Hey Wilma, I find it so amazing how nature always lets us know what she's up to. Our ancestors had no choice but to observe and they managed as best they could. Beautiful picture presented here with the Monoku! Love, Audrey
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November 10, 2010 at 6:31 AM
sounds pretty
Mehta Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 6:21 AM
You have defined the "adorned" with nice images,
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