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Adieu, My Love

Throgh the clamor of distressful days I live in soulful memory of my ‘girl’ In vain, I keep my door ajar For her light footsteps, once more to fall On my lonely bed, I often turn around For her closeness whenever I feel alone Through dingy corridors, wildly stray After elusive shadows, wander forlorn. I know she is in some far Paradise Her eyes feasting on the glory of each new dawn With fadeless flowers blossoming around And endless mysteries in all marvels born Though an emptiness often engulfs me I am reminded of the love she has graciously left That she used to avow between tender sighs Whenever I lay silent on her cleaving breast I know, I am now a lone, weary traveler Slouching unsteady as my life moulders But with stoic endurance, I shall bear My hefty baggage on my weak shoulders Now I wait for the fading of the night For another new dawn yet to break above To begin life all over anew To be united evermore with my dainty Love Till then… till we are one, my love Farewell! Farewell, my sweet dove!!
__________________________________ July.2.2022 ~Placed Fourth~ Farewell Theme Rhyming Poetry Contest Sponsor: Lisa YY

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Date: 7/14/2022 3:18:00 PM
Your's is a beautiful poem, Valsa. It should be higher. "In vain I keep my door ajar, for her light footsteps once more to fall" it touched my heart. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2022 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Love the ending. Have a great/blessed day.................
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Date: 7/13/2022 10:15:00 PM
A very lovely and sweet sad farewell poem to your love my dear friend Valsa. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs
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Date: 7/4/2022 4:32:00 PM
Lovely tribute to one you love, Valsa. I could feel the love and the longing to once again meet in the oneness of your love. Good luck in the contest! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/2/2022 9:54:00 PM
Sweet, sweet tribute to true love. Beautiful penning, Valsa! Happiness and Hope, Gershon
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Date: 7/2/2022 8:00:00 PM
Melodic yet melancholy and wonderfully emotional. Well done and good luck!
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Date: 7/2/2022 10:43:00 AM
Wishing "Farewell" is not the same as, "Until we meet again!" but enjoyed your poem! Aloha!
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Date: 7/2/2022 10:29:00 AM
Ahhh, this is beautiful, Valsa. the sponsor of the contest is sure to be well pleased.
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Date: 7/2/2022 6:52:00 AM
Goodbyes are always painful. Much grief you convey in this emotive write, Valsa. Well done in your usual gifted style. Best to you.
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Date: 7/2/2022 6:30:00 AM
In this poem, you, Valsa, did an excellent job of portraying the psychological burden that comes with being apart. This poem is beautiful and of a really high caliber; it is filled with a broad range of sensations and experiences. I wish you the best of luck in the contest dear friend.
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Date: 7/2/2022 12:59:00 AM
Indeed this poem is full of emotions and feelings. Dear Valsa, it is lovely and deserves the best of wins.
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Date: 7/1/2022 11:20:00 PM
You captured the emotional side of separation well in your verse Valsa, Its painful for both sides, good luck in the contest. Greetings from Akyaka, Turkey. Tom
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