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Already the leaves are staining red, Blood, too thin, seeps through taut skin, Capillaries weak walled and weeping; Dying Summer bows proud head, Emptied of green glory; Filled, fiery cauldrons blaze red-orange, Golden flamed tongues glowing. How harsh that she must fly Into the great beyond, Jettisoned like a human soul Killed before its time. Letting go, whether fast or slow, Makes no variance in the pain; Numbingly, it strikes the heart Over and over again. Passionate, she would linger, Queenly in her floral gown, Regaled for stunning splendor; Sympathy never his approach, Time beats a strong percussive stroke Unstoppable, dispensed in quick cadence. Valiantly she struggles, clinging, While wild winds hew each leaf down; Xylogenous lichen sparsely veils Yearning limbs laid vulnerable and bare: Zephyrus and Chloris frolic there no more. Note: Zephyrus, the gentle god and personification of the west wind, the bringer of light spring and summer breezes in Greek mythology; he abducted and fathered children with the goddess Chloris and gave her the domain of flowers. Xylogenous - living on or in wood Copyright, August 15, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 9/11/2014 9:06:00 AM
Hi Faye, A monumental poem. There are so many nuances. A gem to read again and again. Well done on achieving the winners list. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations Faye,, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
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Date: 9/8/2014 12:49:00 PM
so beautifully descriptive Faye lovely pen congrats on 1st place ty for your support hugs
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Date: 9/8/2014 6:22:00 AM
A top 7 rating for this lovely, captivating write, Faye!! Very enjoyable Abecedarian, tackled with ease. Congratulations on a merited top win. // paul
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Date: 9/7/2014 11:39:00 PM
Amazing... Thank you and God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/7/2014 8:19:00 PM
As unique as most of your verse, you truly have a 'voice' Congrad's on your win, proud to share the spot with you. Light & Love
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Date: 9/7/2014 4:09:00 PM
A lovely salute to the demise of summer. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:48:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/29/2014 4:14:00 PM
Well written Faye.
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Date: 8/19/2014 10:58:00 PM
Splendid write.. :) i can start my muse in this contest.. :D but wow you did it flawlessly.. :)
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Date: 8/19/2014 10:59:00 PM
i mean i cant yet..
Date: 8/16/2014 5:34:00 PM
Faye this is wonderful, you have captured this form beautifully, best of luck in the contest, you have inspired me to give it a whirl ~~
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Date: 8/16/2014 3:05:00 PM
Very impressive Faye..hugs Tim
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Date: 8/16/2014 7:10:00 AM
wow simply stunning - i have no idea where to start with this contest so good luck! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/16/2014 6:28:00 AM
Beautiful write faye..!!! enjoyed your poem and the art...Please look over my poems and share your views
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Date: 8/16/2014 12:25:00 AM
Awesome write Faye! love the new words there, glad to learn< hv a blessed day!
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Date: 8/15/2014 8:42:00 PM
Good job..I haven't tried this yet as I'm afraid of X and Z...lol. BG
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