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Adding Clarity To Ray Gridley's Limerick

Ray Gridley has a possible diagnosis Alas, rabbits do catch viral myxomatosis Since Jan's is a famous banging bunny Who stays far from field and ANY honey Energizer Bunny will bang on till unconscious! (c)Deo, 04152017

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Anil Deo

Date: 4/17/2017 2:34:00 PM

Lisa, only U can say it that wonderfully. Jan's everyone's treasure here, as you are. But one man's treasure in another's person's junk, they say. Recall, before Jesus cleaned me and humanity, we were all junk, and any good we did, were "filthy rags." you'd make a tremendous preacher & counselor Lisa. But retirement is nice too. shalom,shalom & May Jesus and the Trinity guide u & keep u healthy & joyful, always. Anil

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/17/2017 10:16:00 AM

Good Morning Anil. I see you joined in on some fun and play. Good for you for it is good for the soul. Nice work and execution. I have seen Jan's entries. She is fabulous. Have a wonderful day. Have a wonderful day. Well done. Honestly

Anil Deo

Date: 4/15/2017 8:58:00 PM

Energizer Bunny was innocently banging on the drum Jan got him, solar recharge courtesy of Mr. Allison (Will i ever live this down, Andrea?)

Anil Deo

Date: 4/15/2017 8:50:00 PM

Hey Andrea! this is the craziest day of my fifties ... called princess & preacher & a PRINCE Charming all in a few hours. Glad I do American Christianity, STRIKE - bad joke.Not ordained yet, & preacher proudly. Forgive me Father -- and all mothers ... Thx for your visit. Much appreciated (i think - wink {<.^.>})

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2017 8:03:00 PM

oh this is GREAT. And you say you are a preacher, huh?? About my rose bushes. My daughter in law was kind enough to plant them for me. I do very little except water them!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/15/2017 11:32:00 AM

Hilarious my dearest, Anil! Since you have used two Greek words in line, 1 "diagnosis" and in line two, "myxomatosis" why don't you consider to use a third Greek word on line three " apotheosis" it might work! What do you think? haha! Wonderfully done my dear!

Anil Deo
Date: 4/15/2017 2:08:00 PM

The prognosis for my using "apotheosis" is good. Thanks for stopping by --- and fueling these Limerickian Fires. Shalom & Eirene!

Anil Deo

Date: 4/15/2017 7:53:00 AM

Gents, the cure for LIMERICK FEVER is in a poem, Taxus Cuspidata, possibly native to Texas ... I am thinking of posting it, but I'd better get authorization from my attorneys (Allison & Allison Esq.) Cheers Ray and Victor (At least I don't do limericks on Good Friday & Easter/Sunday). After that ... beware the Limerick Ogre.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/15/2017 2:41:00 AM

ha ha ha a great limerick Anil:-) Ray's limerick reply to my poem is probably my favourite ever comment ... Great response to his poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2017 4:03:00 AM

I have had several collaborations that have resulted in lots of soupers writing limericks which have been inspired by my initial poems :-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo
Date: 4/15/2017 2:44:00 AM

Thanks Jan. You may have started something .... hahahhaha God is good. amen