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Acting Out

. Acting Out Standing, lying, falling, crawling, I keep trying, crying, lying, rhyming, love is blinding I play, obey, eat, -I digest, caress the softness, when I'm blinking, I'm found sinking I find myself thinking, walking, talking, mocking, craving, misbehaving, and dreaming Shake, break, my heart can't take, I smile, in style, small thoughts, are all I got I'm lazy, hazy, I get crazy, I shout, when in doubt, Acting Out, that's what I'm all about By:)

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/22/2014 10:17:00 PM

What a characterization of acting out...a drama queen for sure. Congratulations on your win, well-deserved. The many emotional talents of an artist of the stage and screen.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/21/2014 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your Big win in this contest PD. I loved your last line. Great rhyming.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/20/2014 7:16:00 AM

awesome. well put and well placed in the contest. grats on this work ;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/19/2014 3:26:00 AM

hahahah,, i love this rhymes.. :D i can just imagine how it is.. :D hahahahahha i love it really.. :) CONGRATULATIONS LINDA, love lots.. :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2014 1:27:00 AM

Wow Linda ! unimaginable,,, great poetry,,, congrats on great win !

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/18/2014 7:32:00 PM

Nice win PD-Linda... Congratulations.... Verlena

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/18/2014 7:28:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2014 6:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win Linda...nicely done

Tim Smith

Date: 4/18/2014 5:37:00 PM

I like what you are all about Linda...I have a challenge for you....starting today for the next month write down one word describing your day. I will do the same..Make poems out of the words...lol Congratulations on your awesome poem and fine win......hugs Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 4/18/2014 3:34:00 PM

Very amusing...left me breathless :) Congrats on fine win. // paul

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/18/2014 3:30:00 PM

you PD.. how can you create this kind of poetry... I'm envy!! ..:O)) Wish I could be in your body one day ,so that I can't just be somebody... I don't wanna be nobody.. so here I am ..Sending you a smile.. COngratulations, Lady in Rhyme!!! ..:O))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2014 3:27:00 PM

LOL, Thank you Julie, this is one of floopy poems. Glad you hosted this contest.... Thank you for the win... PD

Richard D Seal

Date: 6/25/2013 7:51:00 PM

Just passing by to say hello my Sweet Dark Friend, seems we both got nothing new on but least you have plenty in reserve for me, Take care, Richard

David Scott

Date: 7/27/2012 3:03:00 PM

wicked like the word combination i tryed with stumbling mumbaling I fall crumbaling tumbaling being a fool ilike trhis a lot so much to choose from x david scott

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/30/2012 6:29:00 PM

Great assortment of words to bring the message PD. Hope it comes to a satisfactory conclusion without too much hassle. P S Why is bl wishing you Merry Christmas? Am I missing something here?

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/24/2011 6:12:00 AM

I always miss, I am blessed. Wonderful cultivation of inner mine of thoughts. Thanks. Wish you Happy Merry Christmas day and sweet happy New Year. bl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/5/2011 11:13:00 AM

ARE A ~CONTINUE~

Jezabella Singe

Date: 9/18/2010 8:21:00 PM

hi its jez! you commented on my poem and yours is great!!!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/12/2010 7:47:00 AM

hey pd how are you?? thanks for your support and recognizing my poem in your contest!! It makes me keep trying.

Michael Gelb

Date: 7/2/2010 3:29:00 PM

Very good I liked your poem. I only started writing poems since my wife died in 2009 I can relate to rhyming poems better than others. As you can tell from my poems. A lot of poems I don’t understand and I would hate to give a wrong comment. I want my poems to honor my wife long after I’m gone. Thank you I had to go to the dictionary for the word "couplets"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2010 10:58:00 AM

Interesting couplets that you have penned in this one..A good mixture of the good, the bad, and the ugly...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for faithfully stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Matthew Pawlak

Date: 6/17/2010 6:56:00 PM

Cool poem =) i like the realizm in this. Thank you for your comments on my poem - Matt

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2010 9:31:00 PM

I think that last couplet says it all, P.D. and I enjoyed reading ALL of this cool rhyming poem of yours. Great rhythm! HOpe you are ok these days. Haven't heard from ya in a little while. Let me check out yuour last post! Luv,Andrea

Phil Boy

Date: 6/15/2010 8:25:00 PM

crazy does B.boy

Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/15/2010 6:35:00 PM

loll.i found this funny. a very amusing rhyme.hahahaa. hey, sorry i havn't been on for long anymore.i've been in summer school. and i have forced myself to study a lot. i barely study anything, and its a really bad habit,so i need to start now. so like i had fun while doing so today,in a group at my summer class. we had a good laugh, we were all doing so well, until the sounds of this girl in the hallway sneezing non-stop, but it sounded more like moans and banging of a wall.ahh,good stuff