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ACTING OUT

.            Acting Out

Standing, lying, falling, crawling, I keep trying, crying, lying, rhyming, love is blinding
I play, obey, eat, -I digest, caress the softness, when I'm blinking, I'm found sinking 
I find myself thinking, walking, talking, mocking, craving, misbehaving, and dreaming
Shake, break, my heart can't take, I smile, in style, small thoughts, are all I got
I'm lazy, hazy, I get crazy, I shout, when in doubt, Acting Out, that's what I'm all about

By:) 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/22/2014 10:17:00 PM
What a characterization of acting out...a drama queen for sure. Congratulations on your win, well-deserved. The many emotional talents of an artist of the stage and screen.
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Date: 4/21/2014 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your Big win in this contest PD. I loved your last line. Great rhyming.
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Date: 4/20/2014 7:16:00 AM
awesome. well put and well placed in the contest. grats on this work ;)
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Date: 4/19/2014 3:26:00 AM
hahahah,, i love this rhymes.. :D i can just imagine how it is.. :D hahahahahha i love it really.. :) CONGRATULATIONS LINDA, love lots.. :D
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Date: 4/19/2014 1:27:00 AM
Wow Linda ! unimaginable,,, great poetry,,, congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/18/2014 7:32:00 PM
Nice win PD-Linda... Congratulations.... Verlena
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Date: 4/18/2014 7:28:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/18/2014 6:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win Linda...nicely done
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Date: 4/18/2014 5:37:00 PM
I like what you are all about Linda...I have a challenge for you....starting today for the next month write down one word describing your day. I will do the same..Make poems out of the words...lol Congratulations on your awesome poem and fine win......hugs Tim
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Date: 4/18/2014 3:34:00 PM
Very amusing...left me breathless :) Congrats on fine win. // paul
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Date: 4/18/2014 3:30:00 PM
you PD.. how can you create this kind of poetry... I'm envy!! ..:O)) Wish I could be in your body one day ,so that I can't just be somebody... I don't wanna be nobody.. so here I am ..Sending you a smile.. COngratulations, Lady in Rhyme!!! ..:O))
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Date: 4/18/2014 3:27:00 PM
LOL, Thank you Julie, this is one of floopy poems. Glad you hosted this contest.... Thank you for the win... PD
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:51:00 PM
Just passing by to say hello my Sweet Dark Friend, seems we both got nothing new on but least you have plenty in reserve for me, Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/27/2012 3:03:00 PM
wicked like the word combination i tryed with stumbling mumbaling I fall crumbaling tumbaling being a fool ilike trhis a lot so much to choose from x david scott
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:29:00 PM
Great assortment of words to bring the message PD. Hope it comes to a satisfactory conclusion without too much hassle. P S Why is bl wishing you Merry Christmas? Am I missing something here?
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Date: 12/24/2011 6:12:00 AM
I always miss, I am blessed. Wonderful cultivation of inner mine of thoughts. Thanks. Wish you Happy Merry Christmas day and sweet happy New Year. bl
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Date: 2/5/2011 11:13:00 AM
ARE A ~CONTINUE~
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Date: 10/28/2010 9:34:00 PM
P.D.--How are you doing? Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break? Do you have writer's block? I think you are holding out on a big secret, and I feel left out....see you around sometime in the future. Take care!~cda
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Date: 10/15/2010 12:32:00 PM
STOP ACTING OUT!!
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:21:00 PM
hi its jez! you commented on my poem and yours is great!!!!
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:28:00 PM
"Will the real *________* please stand up, please stand up, please stand up, will the real *__________* please stand up, please stand up, please stand up!"
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:47:00 AM
hey pd how are you?? thanks for your support and recognizing my poem in your contest!! It makes me keep trying.
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Date: 7/2/2010 3:29:00 PM
Very good I liked your poem. I only started writing poems since my wife died in 2009 I can relate to rhyming poems better than others. As you can tell from my poems. A lot of poems I don’t understand and I would hate to give a wrong comment. I want my poems to honor my wife long after I’m gone. Thank you I had to go to the dictionary for the word "couplets"
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Date: 6/18/2010 10:58:00 AM
Interesting couplets that you have penned in this one..A good mixture of the good, the bad, and the ugly...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for faithfully stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2010 6:56:00 PM
Cool poem =) i like the realizm in this. Thank you for your comments on my poem - Matt
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