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With Bated Breath Walking up the winding path inside the cemetery where my family is buried; the path leads me through the oldest parts, and I recall haunted stories of childhood. Breathless, I walk faster and whisper a prayer; another turn, then another, oh am I lost! Turning around in circles- I see through trees the sun; even the hushed angels sigh for me as quickly I walk down a path familiar- finding my family tomb. Butterflies dance and twirl, and reaching branches of willows drape the stone; everything is still and quiet, even though birds sing, oh a red rose in my hand is now wilted dead; the words engraved I now read with bated breath, I remember happy blissful memories and sadly, too soon deaths. ___________________________ August 21, 2019 Poetry/Acrostic/With Bated Breath Copyright Protected ID, 19-1199-040-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to FGI Blog Series 6 - Acrostic Brian Strand Podium Place 1

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Date: 11/17/2019 1:54:00 PM
A clever acrostic, i can see why it did so well... great last stanza..
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:49:00 PM
Silent, thanks for visiting and for the compliment !
Date: 11/17/2019 1:29:00 PM
Congrats on your podium place with Brian, Constance. The ending on this poem is so suitable for melancholy. It's amazing how much poetry you write between the contests and the other challenges you can find. Are you still keeping up on exercise dance class, etc? You are a wonder!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:51:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats, oh I have a lot of time on my hands these days and I fill it with writing, photography, dance and exercise and watching TV !

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