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Across Realms

The years had crossed the realms Of reason’s need Worn away its edgeless boundaries Bent the trees against the winds of current trends. Old shadows of the giants Hide now in cloudless caves Their children waving sticks Pretending they are brave Look for one to take the helm And sail across realms dream. ©5/1/2023 Pick-A-Title, Vol 36 – Poetry Contest Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/1/2023 3:59:00 PM
Hi John, this is quite impressive, your first line 'crossed the realms/of reasons need' - strikes me because I think most people are more motivated by emotion than reason - also great rhyme of 'the winds/of current trends' - how they come and go - should be a top winner for you~
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