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Acoustical Rhythm

Thoughts of romance and Paris dare to fade
drifting into oblivion, along with her warmth
slowly slipping from last embers of my spark
holding on to, one more alone a cappella night

lost notes tap within a heart that barely beats
chill has taken her place, still midnight rings
it's quiet, but here the echoes chase the breeze
where yesterday's cut down the flowers weep 

sing to me, my wonders, that familiar feeling
tuned in to the unattainable, not yet forgetting
I'm just another acoustical rhythm, reaching out
seeking, simply a rhyme to be alive with tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/5/2017 1:01:00 PM
Echoes chasing the breeze is awesome line. Very cool
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Date: 11/4/2017 11:43:00 AM
Oh...when found I'm sure you'll make splendid music, dear. Lovely write...as always.
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Date: 11/4/2017 10:00:00 AM
So sad to loose that mystical feeling, well done Tim...
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Date: 11/3/2017 3:54:00 PM
Really nice and a romantic melody Tim. Here's hoping more read this wonderful composition
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Date: 11/3/2017 1:47:00 PM
I enjoyed the music of this poem Tim. It is very nice. ! :)
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