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The apex of an orange is the same, a philosopher's allegory for humans. In a world of metered verse and rhyme, orange is an unlit shadow-show on Plato's cave— pock-marked, blind, drying rind, lying in wait to find its rhythm, sway its way into acceptance. Slow dance on the walls of interrupted light, hiding what's outside—inside itself a growing need to see where sunlight is born, know itself in reflection and know the name of a new day is Dawn. No matter how perfect a form in the dark, there's no substitute for a citrus kiss of vitamins when the stone rolls away from an opening to reveal the orange sun rise.

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Date: 7/21/2024 4:42:00 PM
What you've done with orange, gosh you're so good. I truly hope someone dedicates a poem to you for the contest. You're certainly worthy of a tribute.
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Date: 7/22/2024 10:26:00 AM
Haha! I sure appreciate the kind words - although I'm rather attached to the idea of continuing to fly under the radar around here - it suits the garden witch persona I'm trying to develop and results in a lot less drama overall xD Have a great week, Tom. Thanks again!

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