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Acid Tears

The weighty hand of Death crushes the core of your being, sending a shiver, slithering up your spine like a cold chill. And an empathic moon silently slips away, as darkness conceals the tears pooling in your eyes. Your heart is numb; you feel nothing: there is no anger, no hate, no feeling at all: just an all-consuming emptiness, where your heart should be. Abandoned to your worst nightmare: life has lost its meaning; it just is. Death has reduced your heart to a hollowed-out shell, that's falling apart, piece by piece. Love receded into memory's maze of bittersweet moments and forever dreams. And acid tears burn your cheeks like rivers of fire; corrosive enough to dissolve hope and tarnish your soul. Crumbling into a fetal position, you hug your knees and rhythmically rock back and forth; teetering on the edge of despair. Your soulmate died, leaving a gaping hole in your heart: that time will never be able to fill. Your breathing is erratic as panic wrestles for control: but you fight back, slowly regaining your faculties. Yet, your heart harbors pain, and the tears spontaneously flow once again. You can't see how you'll continue your life: there are no more tomorrows to share, only yesterdays to recall. And you've never felt so helpless and vulnerable: a part of you died; now grief consumes the rest.
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Blodgett Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 8:51 PM
This was a deep dive from the hearts pedestal that made me feel the emptiness and abandonment word by tragic word. Love your poetry. Lonna
Pinet Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Thanks so much Paula, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:07 PM
Deep and wonderful imagery, Emile, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Thanks Eve, as always I appreciate your support, my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Raw emotion. Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support, as always my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 10:32 AM
wow, great one, congrats ;)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Luloo, your friendly support keeps my poetic dreams from collapsing my friend, Emile.
Lawless Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Been there - done that. What a magnificent write Emile, captures the absolute deceit of betrayals ugliness. congrats on your placement in the contest
Pinet Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thanks John, I greatly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:29 PM
Extremely deep and moving. Hard to believe we successfully pull ourselves together after heartless betrayal. Superbly written, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Emile, you convey the depth of sorrow that is felt with a broken heart so profoundly in this graphic piece! I can easily see why it is so high up on the winner's list. A very deserved congratulations my friend! "Acid tears burn my cheeks like rivers of fire corrosive enough to dissolve hope and tarnish my soul." Wow! I am so impressed! xxoo
Pinet Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thanks Connie, I bask in the warmth of your praise my friend, you are too kind, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Another fine win with this amazing poem, really touches the heart, so descriptive in it's imagery, congrats on a fine second place win!
Pinet Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Thanks so much John, you have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Well done Emile, enjoyed second time round even more, congrats on a winning poem, I knew it!
Pinet Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Thanks John, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Barden Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:19 PM
Very powerful and heart-wrenching write - Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Emile - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)
Pinet Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Thanks Gregory, your comments and support are most appreciated and welcomed my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 1:22 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent and emotional write, well done !
Pinet Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 2:24 PM
Thanks so much Broken, I appreciate the opportunity to enter your contest and compete with such talented poets, Emile.
Roper Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Congratulations on your win, Emile, hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Eve, and may I offer you congratulations on your winning poem as well, good job my friend, Emile.
Y. Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 4:53 PM
Hi Smile, Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the "Broken Hearted Poem contest ". It was well deserved- Alexis
Pinet Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 7:19 PM
Thank you very much Alexis, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Oh Emile! This describes it perfectly..."a hole in my heart". Exactly. I read it and wept though my tears were dry. It seems I am all cried out. GL in the contest. I think it's a winner.
Pinet Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Thank you Carole, I'm sorry if this poem touched a nerve my friend, but as always I appreciate your comments and support and wish you well, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Very powerful write Emile, so real it's hard to imagine these are not real feelings and emotions you experienced personally, if not an even more impressive write, WILL do well in the contest!
Pinet Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thanks so much John, your comments and support are always most appreciated and welcomed my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Such intense imagery in this very hard hitting poem Emile - am adding it to my faves it is so powerfully penned. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 6:11 PM
Thank you Jan, your comments and support are always most appreciated my friend, Emile.
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