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Heart is aching, seeking divine union Found within, in erst childlike innocence Ever present throb of bliss elation Our fall from grace, caused by separation Pursuing dreams in the world of transience Heart is aching, seeking divine union Deep hypnotic trance, caused by stagnation Negating subtle voice of our conscience Ever present throb of bliss elation Dwelling in dark dungeons of delusion Scars of sorrow, show on our countenance Heart is aching, seeking divine union Attachment the glue, causing contraction Whilst joy mist is, with love in dalliance Ever present throb of bliss elation Here and now, we may find liberation Consigning false ego to decadence Heart is aching, seeking divine union Ever present throb of bliss elation 25-April-2021 Writing prompt - Ache - poetry contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 4/28/2021 8:29:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your wonderful Villanelle poem, I admire your use of words, well done, love _Constance
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Date: 4/26/2021 11:09:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for hosting such a meaningful contest! Delighted with my win!
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