Susan Ashley Poet Sonnet

Accidentally On Purpose

Come kiss me baby and I’ll light your fire
  I’ll melt you like the center of the sun
    impassioned flame will sexy strum your lyre
      in molten vibes of music  - one on one

      together we will fly the solar wind
    on silky whispered thrills we both will ride
  in ecstasy we’ll feel just like we’ve sinned
seductive absolution satisfied

so touch your lips to mine and we’ll explode
  a supernova of our cosmic lust
    sweet sparks we’ll make let brightness be bestowed
      on universe - our love affair a must!

   in melted stardust ink I write your name
on serendipity that’s yours to claim


Susan Ashley 
March 30, 2018


~ First Place ~
Contest: Sonnet's Salutation
Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Greg Gaul December 30, 2021 at 7:36 AM I claim it! Stunning sonnet, sexy song sung by siren poet. Superb. Susan Ashley December 30, 2021 at 5:17 PM Dear Greg, indeed! Your exuberant response tickles me. I relish your exuberant comments where the alliterative beauty is not lost on me. Thank you, my friend, for your gracious visit. Warmest wishes to you for a happy new year filled with light, love and inspiration.. ~Susan

Janis Medders Tobechi August 14, 2019 at 5:53 AM This is a good one Susan and I love the first line. It sets the mood for the entire poem. Congratulations. Susan Ashley August 15, 2019 at 10:24 AM Thank you, Janis, for your wonderful comments and kind congrats. I'm glad you enjoyed my sonnet - I certainly enjoyed your visit! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

John Hamilton August 10, 2019 at 6:25 PM This is a great one Susan, it got it's just due this time around congrats on a fine win! Susan Ashley August 10, 2019 at 9:36 PM Thank you, John, for the honor of my placement in your wonderful contest and for taking the time to host contests that motivate and inspire. Both your gracious comments and kind congrats are truly appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Robert Lindley April 28, 2018 at 9:09 AM You my friend have crafted a superb sonnet. The closing verses are glistening and glittering gold flacks as well. A fav.... Susan Ashley April 28, 2018 at 12:54 PM Dear Robert, it's such a joy to read your treasured thoughts.. your visits always light me up with a smile. My time here on PS has been quite limited for the last several weeks, hopefully that will change soon. Many many thank you's for your superb comments, the fav and your lovely support.. you, my friend, are a guiding light and I cherish your shining friendship. Warmest wishes, hugs and blessing to you and yours, dear Robert. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu April 25, 2018 at 6:54 PM Hello Susan, i also enjoyed your sonnet. Yet i do read it as a romance. That is how i read it. Have a nice evening my friend. Susan Ashley April 27, 2018 at 10:37 AM Hello Darlene, your visits are always a delight. Thank you for commenting on my romantic sonnet.. I cherish your wonderful thoughts. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I hope you have a nice weekend, my friend. ~Susan

John Gondolf April 8, 2018 at 12:36 PM WOW, Susan, I haven't had much time to read lately but I just found this gem. This is a side of you I haven't seen before. You certainly know how to write a super sensual sonnet; this is hot. John Susan Ashley April 8, 2018 at 12:43 PM John, I cant tell you how happy I am to receive your visit and your beautiful comments. I can relate to not having much time here lately, as I have been so busy and I know you are too at this time of year. I'm glad you found my sonnet.. Your wonderful words are music to my ears coming from you, my esteemed friend. I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux April 6, 2018 at 8:43 AM A clever title and a hot write. You brought the passion. Susan Ashley April 7, 2018 at 9:20 PM and your brought your awesomeness to my poetry page, Richard :) Thank you for your wonderful comments - I'm glad you appreciated my title - and I certainly appreciated your visit, my friend! Warmest wishes always. ~Susan

Jan Allison April 6, 2018 at 7:53 AM phwoarrh Susan you give a different meaning to the 'big bang!... a super sizzling sonnet!:-) hugs jan xx Susan Ashley April 7, 2018 at 9:52 PM Lol! I love your sassy and witty comments, Jan. I'm glad you enjoyed my sonnet - I certainly enjoyed your visit! Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan

FJ Thomas April 4, 2018 at 11:53 AM Well this one sizzles doesn't it?!! Love it Susan! Susan Ashley April 7, 2018 at 9:35 PM Indeed! Thank you for your sizzling comments Shadow. I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem. I enjoyed your visit, as always. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf April 3, 2018 at 9:14 PM Once more, with feeling: The kiss lingers leisurely a moment or two, and then fly the sparks! Whew! Blazing passion, Susan! :) gw Susan Ashley April 7, 2018 at 9:34 PM Thank you, my friend, Gershon for your blazing and beautiful comments. It's such a joy to read your charming and lighthearted words, they always leave me with a smile and an appreciation for your friendship. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Winged Warrior April 3, 2018 at 8:47 PM It's too hot for me in this room, girl...need a Canadian winter to cool me down lol...great passionate write Susan...stay in the light...^WW^ Susan Ashley April 7, 2018 at 9:30 PM Haha! How bout a polar plunge..? Lol! Thank you Winged Warrior for your awesome comments. Your kindness makes me smile, my friend. Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan

Akkina Downing April 3, 2018 at 8:59 AM OMG, this room just erupted with blazing fire... Lol! Su, I can read this everyday and will never get tired of it. Deliciously romantic! All my sizzle love for you my awesome and beautiful friend ~ Kina Susan Ashley April 7, 2018 at 8:56 PM Oh dearest Kina! Sorry for the delay in responding, this week's been so busy.. Thank you, my beautiful friend, for your lovely comments. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem and I'm super happy you brought your awesomeness to my poetry page! Happy hugs and lotsa sizzle love for you, my friend!! ~Su

Laura Breidenthal April 2, 2018 at 7:02 PM This was quite a hot, bedazzling sonnet. Susan. Very impressive. (: I really like, "seductive absolution satisfied"...what a stellar line among many in this passionate piece! The second stanza in general is gold, as well as the last 2 lines. Excellent! Always, Laura Susan Ashley April 7, 2018 at 8:42 PM Laura, you brighten up my poetry page with your graceful and thoughtful presence. Thank you for you delectable comments and I just love the use of the word 'bedazzling'! Your thoughts are always 24k and appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Arturo Michael April 1, 2018 at 4:46 PM A free loving poem...good imagery and as we say in the islands... a hot pepper one...All the best Susan...A big hug... Susan Ashley April 1, 2018 at 6:24 PM Dear Arturo, I hope you and yours have enjoyed a lovely Easter. It's always such a pleasure to see you on my poetry page. Thank you for your wonderful comments mon ami, your friendship is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes and hugs to you.. ~Susan

Robert Lindley April 1, 2018 at 12:42 PM Great title and fantastic content. First stanza set the gleaming stage and the following brilliant verses met the very high mark! A fav... Susan Ashley April 1, 2018 at 6:22 PM Hello Robert, I hope you and yours have enjoyed a lovely Easter. Your beautiful comments uplift and inspire me always, you have such a generous and kind spirit. Thank you for your precious words, my friend, and for the fav.. warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Paul Callus April 1, 2018 at 3:18 AM This is beautiful, Susan, and definitely not by accident:) You have taken 'romantic' to a higher level of lust and passion. Too many striking phrases to quote them all, but I can assure you that all the content is 'explosive'! This goes to my favs:) Warm regards // paul Susan Ashley April 1, 2018 at 6:17 PM Paul, I so enjoy your presence gracing my poetry page. Thank you for your cherished comments. You continue to inspire me and I truly appreciate you.. and thank you for the fav, as well, my wonderful friend:)) I hope you and your family enjoyed a lovely Easter.. warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Mark Peterson March 31, 2018 at 6:42 PM A lovely piece, and you closed it so well. Susan Ashley March 31, 2018 at 8:32 PM Thank you Mark for the delight of your visit and for the thoughtful kindness of your comments.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Jack Horne March 31, 2018 at 2:47 PM this is awesome! Susan Ashley March 31, 2018 at 6:39 PM Your comment is awesome, Jack! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jean Murray March 31, 2018 at 11:37 AM I just love this Susan. Girl power! Susan Ashley March 31, 2018 at 2:10 PM Thank you Jean for your awesome and uplifting comments.. Girl power indeed! Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Silent One March 31, 2018 at 7:59 AM I think Maria is having an influence on you.. A sensual sonnet, that seems to have tickled a few peoples fancy.. nice light alliteration, which I feel is best.. I do over do it... lol... Susan Ashley March 31, 2018 at 10:36 AM Lol! Yes, Silent One, Maria has helped to bring out my 'inner tigress'.. thank you for your lovely thoughts and comments my friend.. and I think your alliteration is always amazing.. warmest wishes ~Susan

Maria Williams March 31, 2018 at 6:00 AM OH wow Susan, welcome to the club of Women's Erotic Writes - Eros himself would have been proud of you my dear. Bravo! Particularly like this line Exploding in 'a supernova of our cosmic lust' - Hmmm, 'in melted stardust ink I write your name' ;o) Love it and a FAVE....Maria xxx Susan Ashley March 31, 2018 at 2:06 PM Thank you Maria, my dear friend, for the warm welcome into the Women's Erotic Writes Club - I'm happy to join you there and a proud moment for me indeed! :)) I'm elated by your lovely comments and many thanks for the fave as well, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan

Demetrios Trifiatis March 31, 2018 at 4:15 AM I loved the title but adored the content dear Susan! Too much for me though! haha! Susan Ashley March 31, 2018 at 2:47 PM Thank you, dear Demetrios, for the kindness of your visit and for the delight of your heartwarming comments :) warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Viv Wigley March 31, 2018 at 1:37 AM Wow, Susan, hot stuff- I've had to undo a couple of buttons..... lovely, fiery write. Viv x Susan Ashley March 31, 2018 at 2:51 PM Feelin Hot Hot Hot, we're you Viv? Lol! Thank you for your heartwarming comments that elicited a smile :)) Your visits are always a delight! Warmest wishes my friend. ~ Susan

Gary Bateman March 31, 2018 at 12:44 AM Again, Dear Susan, a wondrous sonnet here for sure!! I did get a Big Chuckle from reading it. Happy Easter!! And best wishes to your family!! Gary

Gary Bateman March 31, 2018 at 12:41 AM Hello Dear Susan, I have already exploded like a supernova just reading this wondrously delightful sonnet of yours!! LOL!! HA!! HA!! "Accidentally On Purpose" -- eh?? I really like this title. And "melted stardust ink" -- a most perfect touch. I noticed that Danny (below) asked if you are married?? Methinks thou be not so meek!! (If you have time, recommend you read a poem I wrote some time ago called: "This Fury-Fiery Moment of Hot Sensual Love.") My wife, Ingrid, got a big laugh from it. Best!! Gary Susan Ashley March 31, 2018 at 7:04 PM Gary, thank you for your in-depth and insightful comments. It's always such a pleasure when you grace my page with your treasured thoughts. I enjoy your comments and I enjoy your poetry, I will certainly read your recommended poem.. Warmest wishes and Happy Easter to you and yours my friend. ~Susan

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