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Accidentally On Purpose

Come kiss me baby and I’ll light your fire I’ll melt you like the center of the sun impassioned flame will sexy strum your lyre in molten vibes of music - one on one together we will fly the solar wind on silky whispered thrills we both will ride in ecstasy we’ll feel just like we’ve sinned seductive absolution satisfied so touch your lips to mine and we’ll explode a supernova of our cosmic lust sweet sparks we’ll make let brightness be bestowed on universe - our love affair a must! in melted stardust ink I write your name on serendipity that’s yours to claim Susan Ashley March 30, 2018 ~Third Place ~ Contest: N/A rerun - 2 Sponsor: John Hamilton Submitted: August 8, 2019 *N/A'd* Contest: 2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 20 Sponsor: Mark Toney Judged: 2/24/2019

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Date: 8/14/2019 5:53:00 AM
This is a good one Susan and I love the first line. It sets the mood for the entire poem. Congratulations.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/15/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thank you, Janis, for your wonderful comments and kind congrats. I'm glad you enjoyed my sonnet - I certainly enjoyed your visit! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 8/10/2019 6:25:00 PM
This is a great one Susan, it got it's just due this time around congrats on a fine win!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/10/2019 9:36:00 PM
Thank you, John, for the honor of my placement in your wonderful contest and for taking the time to host contests that motivate and inspire. Both your gracious comments and kind congrats are truly appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 4/28/2018 9:09:00 AM
You my friend have crafted a superb sonnet. The closing verses are glistening and glittering gold flacks as well. A fav....
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/28/2018 12:54:00 PM
Dear Robert, it's such a joy to read your treasured thoughts.. your visits always light me up with a smile. My time here on PS has been quite limited for the last several weeks, hopefully that will change soon. Many many thank you's for your superb comments, the fav and your lovely support.. you, my friend, are a guiding light and I cherish your shining friendship. Warmest wishes, hugs and blessing to you and yours, dear Robert. ~Susan
Date: 4/25/2018 6:54:00 PM
Hello Susan, i also enjoyed your sonnet. Yet i do read it as a romance. That is how i read it. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/27/2018 10:37:00 AM
Hello Darlene, your visits are always a delight. Thank you for commenting on my romantic sonnet.. I cherish your wonderful thoughts. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I hope you have a nice weekend, my friend. ~Susan
Date: 4/8/2018 12:36:00 PM
WOW, Susan, I haven't had much time to read lately but I just found this gem. This is a side of you I haven't seen before. You certainly know how to write a super sensual sonnet; this is hot. John
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Date: 4/8/2018 12:43:00 PM
John, I cant tell you how happy I am to receive your visit and your beautiful comments. I can relate to not having much time here lately, as I have been so busy and I know you are too at this time of year. I'm glad you found my sonnet.. Your wonderful words are music to my ears coming from you, my esteemed friend. I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 4/6/2018 8:43:00 AM
A clever title and a hot write. You brought the passion.
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Date: 4/7/2018 9:20:00 PM
and your brought your awesomeness to my poetry page, Richard :) Thank you for your wonderful comments - I'm glad you appreciated my title - and I certainly appreciated your visit, my friend! Warmest wishes always. ~Susan
Date: 4/6/2018 7:53:00 AM
phwoarrh Susan you give a different meaning to the 'big bang!... a super sizzling sonnet!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2018 9:52:00 PM
Lol! I love your sassy and witty comments, Jan. I'm glad you enjoyed my sonnet - I certainly enjoyed your visit! Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan
Date: 4/4/2018 11:53:00 AM
Well this one sizzles doesn't it?!! Love it Susan!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 4/7/2018 9:35:00 PM
Indeed! Thank you for your sizzling comments Shadow. I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem. I enjoyed your visit, as always. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Date: 4/3/2018 9:14:00 PM
Once more, with feeling: The kiss lingers leisurely a moment or two, and then fly the sparks! Whew! Blazing passion, Susan! :) gw
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Date: 4/7/2018 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, Gershon for your blazing and beautiful comments. It's such a joy to read your charming and lighthearted words, they always leave me with a smile and an appreciation for your friendship. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Date: 4/3/2018 8:47:00 PM
It's too hot for me in this room, girl...need a Canadian winter to cool me down lol...great passionate write Susan...stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 4/7/2018 9:30:00 PM
Haha! How bout a polar plunge..? Lol! Thank you Winged Warrior for your awesome comments. Your kindness makes me smile, my friend. Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan
Date: 4/3/2018 8:59:00 AM
OMG, this room just erupted with blazing fire... Lol! Su, I can read this everyday and will never get tired of it. Deliciously romantic! All my sizzle love for you my awesome and beautiful friend ~ Kina
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Date: 4/7/2018 8:56:00 PM
Oh dearest Kina! Sorry for the delay in responding, this week's been so busy.. Thank you, my beautiful friend, for your lovely comments. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem and I'm super happy you brought your awesomeness to my poetry page! Happy hugs and lotsa sizzle love for you, my friend!! ~Su
Date: 4/2/2018 7:02:00 PM
This was quite a hot, bedazzling sonnet. Susan. Very impressive. (: I really like, "seductive absolution satisfied"...what a stellar line among many in this passionate piece! The second stanza in general is gold, as well as the last 2 lines. Excellent! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/7/2018 8:42:00 PM
Laura, you brighten up my poetry page with your graceful and thoughtful presence. Thank you for you delectable comments and I just love the use of the word 'bedazzling'! Your thoughts are always 24k and appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Date: 4/2/2018 8:11:00 AM
Hi Susan , two givers giving and receiving countertransference ::)))Hugs~~~Niall
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:46:00 PM
Indeed, Niall, on the cosmic level lol! Thank you for your delightful comments. Your visits are always enjoyed! :))) Warmest wishes and hugs, my friend. ~Susan
Date: 4/1/2018 4:46:00 PM
A free loving poem...good imagery and as we say in the islands... a hot pepper one...All the best Susan...A big hug...
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Date: 4/1/2018 6:24:00 PM
Dear Arturo, I hope you and yours have enjoyed a lovely Easter. It's always such a pleasure to see you on my poetry page. Thank you for your wonderful comments mon ami, your friendship is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes and hugs to you.. ~Susan
Date: 4/1/2018 12:42:00 PM
Great title and fantastic content. First stanza set the gleaming stage and the following brilliant verses met the very high mark! A fav...
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Date: 4/1/2018 6:22:00 PM
Hello Robert, I hope you and yours have enjoyed a lovely Easter. Your beautiful comments uplift and inspire me always, you have such a generous and kind spirit. Thank you for your precious words, my friend, and for the fav.. warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 4/1/2018 3:18:00 AM
This is beautiful, Susan, and definitely not by accident:) You have taken 'romantic' to a higher level of lust and passion. Too many striking phrases to quote them all, but I can assure you that all the content is 'explosive'! This goes to my favs:) Warm regards // paul
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Date: 4/1/2018 6:17:00 PM
Paul, I so enjoy your presence gracing my poetry page. Thank you for your cherished comments. You continue to inspire me and I truly appreciate you.. and thank you for the fav, as well, my wonderful friend:)) I hope you and your family enjoyed a lovely Easter.. warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 3/31/2018 6:42:00 PM
A lovely piece, and you closed it so well.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/31/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Mark for the delight of your visit and for the thoughtful kindness of your comments.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Date: 3/31/2018 2:47:00 PM
this is awesome!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/31/2018 6:39:00 PM
Your comment is awesome, Jack! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/31/2018 11:37:00 AM
I just love this Susan. Girl power!
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Date: 3/31/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Jean for your awesome and uplifting comments.. Girl power indeed! Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan
Date: 3/31/2018 7:59:00 AM
I think Maria is having an influence on you.. A sensual sonnet, that seems to have tickled a few peoples fancy.. nice light alliteration, which I feel is best.. I do over do it... lol...
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Date: 3/31/2018 10:36:00 AM
Lol! Yes, Silent One, Maria has helped to bring out my 'inner tigress'.. thank you for your lovely thoughts and comments my friend.. and I think your alliteration is always amazing.. warmest wishes ~Susan
Date: 3/31/2018 6:00:00 AM
OH wow Susan, welcome to the club of Women's Erotic Writes - Eros himself would have been proud of you my dear. Bravo! Particularly like this line Exploding in 'a supernova of our cosmic lust' - Hmmm, 'in melted stardust ink I write your name' ;o) Love it and a FAVE....Maria xxx
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Date: 3/31/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Maria, my dear friend, for the warm welcome into the Women's Erotic Writes Club - I'm happy to join you there and a proud moment for me indeed! :)) I'm elated by your lovely comments and many thanks for the fave as well, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan
Date: 3/31/2018 4:15:00 AM
I loved the title but adored the content dear Susan! Too much for me though! haha!
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Date: 3/31/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, dear Demetrios, for the kindness of your visit and for the delight of your heartwarming comments :) warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan
Date: 3/31/2018 1:37:00 AM
Wow, Susan, hot stuff- I've had to undo a couple of buttons..... lovely, fiery write. Viv x
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Date: 3/31/2018 2:51:00 PM
Feelin Hot Hot Hot, we're you Viv? Lol! Thank you for your heartwarming comments that elicited a smile :)) Your visits are always a delight! Warmest wishes my friend. ~ Susan
Date: 3/31/2018 12:44:00 AM
Again, Dear Susan, a wondrous sonnet here for sure!! I did get a Big Chuckle from reading it. Happy Easter!! And best wishes to your family!! Gary
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Date: 3/31/2018 12:41:00 AM
Hello Dear Susan, I have already exploded like a supernova just reading this wondrously delightful sonnet of yours!! LOL!! HA!! HA!! "Accidentally On Purpose" -- eh?? I really like this title. And "melted stardust ink" -- a most perfect touch. I noticed that Danny (below) asked if you are married?? Methinks thou be not so meek!! (If you have time, recommend you read a poem I wrote some time ago called: "This Fury-Fiery Moment of Hot Sensual Love.") My wife, Ingrid, got a big laugh from it. Best!! Gary
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Date: 3/31/2018 7:04:00 PM
Gary, thank you for your in-depth and insightful comments. It's always such a pleasure when you grace my page with your treasured thoughts. I enjoy your comments and I enjoy your poetry, I will certainly read your recommended poem.. Warmest wishes and Happy Easter to you and yours my friend. ~Susan
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