John Freeman Poet Dodoitsu

Abyss

~here the darkest shadows creep
                                          seeps, deep into human souls
                                             abyss enlarges her mouth 
                                                   receives thy coming

                                 In Honor of; Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dream Weaver
                                          And Contest: Dodoitsu Darkness

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 25, 2011 at 12:10 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Moses. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 23, 2011 at 2:30 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 22, 2011 at 5:14 PM Congrats Moses my friend on a super second place win with awesome poetic art...luv...

Wilma Neels September 20, 2011 at 6:39 AM Love the atmosphere you create with this write of yours John, wishing you all the best for the contest.. Thank you for your congrats on my placement in the contest ;) God bless Wilma

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2011 at 1:15 AM great mood created in this one, john!

Constance La France September 19, 2011 at 3:51 PM This Dodiotsu is very beautiful" seeps deep into human souls" . . John, my compliments and I wish you the best in the contest ~~

Sara Kendrick September 18, 2011 at 7:02 PM Reads like a winner for sure..Enjoyed reading your entry this eve..Thanks for stoppping by, commenting on my humble verse...Thanks again for the honor of winners' circle in your contest..Sara

Barbara Gorelick September 18, 2011 at 6:26 PM Another great take on the picture...thanks for my placement in your contest..it means alot to me...I sure enjoy your writing. BG

Joyce Johnson September 18, 2011 at 4:01 PM Good luck with your doditsu John. Thank you for going to the trouble of looking up my would be entry and your kind words