Absence

ABSENCE Absence has the perfume of oblivion, the pallor of light shattered, the poison that cuts love... traces of voices off... Absence is a ghost that watches us when shakes the windows of our soul, and silently blow our wings, and makes us tremble inside...!

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/21/2019 3:17:00 AM

absence- the perfume of oblivion!! wow great

Ann Foster

Date: 10/20/2019 7:47:00 PM

yes... yes... this is spot on... excellent write... I faved.. this one... I am trying not to commit to memory, but there is not enough room in the cave... Hugs. Ann

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/20/2019 2:15:00 PM

Great write! Welcome to poetry Soup :-) x

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/19/2019 10:17:00 PM

A poignant write, Alkas. Welcome to PoetrySoup.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/19/2019 10:23:00 PM

Thank you dear poet salute alkas.

Joseph May

Date: 4/15/2019 10:37:00 PM

Awesome write Alkas..

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/16/2019 8:35:00 AM

Thank you Joseph for the comment...i'll read you soon...alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/15/2019 11:21:00 AM

Hello Alkas Poetry, so good to meet you. Welcome to poetry Soup. I like this poem. Absence also makes the heart grow fonder. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2019 5:28:00 PM

Your welcome my friend. have a nice evening my friend.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 4/15/2019 6:03:00 PM

Many thanks my dear poet for your sweet comment, have a nice week, Alkas Poetry