Abracadabra

Nearby a door of green I stood one day.
I wanted that door to open for me.
“Abracadabra” in the wind echoed.
That magical word I was led to say.
Leprechauns emerged. “Tis March,” they exclaimed.
“Great pranks on people we are here to play!”
You can blame me if leprechauns appear.
Just tell them that they have to go away
if it happens that leprechauns you see.
In the wind echoed “Abracadabra.”
By April those tricksters had gone away!

April 10, 2021 
for William Kekaula's Abracadabra March Magic Poetry Contest
(Used HMS for ten syllables per line - revised shortly after posting)
Note made by William Kekaula: The Abracadabra poetic format is an adaptation I had created from Magic Nine. . . The syllable count is your choice but must be the same for all eleven lines. abRacadabRa is the rhyme scheme, and the lines with the R's are reversed lines. All lines must be rhyming with the exception of lines 'c', and, 'd'.
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Rone Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Congratulation. Your winning piece has the beauty of a peaceful and clever mind, mixed with a wink and a smile.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was creative/magical with this wonderful write. Enjoy your win with blessings..............
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 4:03 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea! great write! BW Krish
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 1:46 AM
Your magical flair did the trick, Andrea, having met the challenge with poetic ease, my compliments for your participation and placement, Aloha!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Did you find the cave with riches?
Callus Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 1:09 AM
This is lovely and imaginative, Andrea. The rhyme scheme is tricky, but you managed it with apparent ease. I'll have to borrow your magic wand :) ~ Regards // paul
Horsman Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:05 PM
If you capture a 'leprechaun' a pot of gold. or better still Poetic bliss.
Ball Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Really cute Andrea. I love fantasy and this is a good one. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Y. Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 2:39 PM
Hi Andrea, You penned a good “ magical” write. I liked how used the “ leprechauns” in your story it was a great nod to Saint Patty's day. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
May Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 2:03 PM
The magic word does the trick, Nicely penned Andrea..hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:32 PM
- Sometimes I wish a magic formula could work :) - Best wishes in the contest with this lovely poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcconnell Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:22 PM
A great write Andrea, so very well-penned indeed, best wishes in the contest. Take care, Gordon
Hankins Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:40 AM
I love it, Andrea, and best wishes in the contest. I also am inexplicably drawn to this abracadabra poetry format and plan to use it from time to time. Your's nice work.
Faulkner Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Love the lively magic of those mischevious leprechauns of March, beautiful repeating line, I'm sure this will do well!
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