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Above the Clouds

Love lifted me into the clouds so high I could not see the world beneath my feet. We sailed away into a sunset sky. I felt so sure my life was then complete! We soared through galaxies, collecting dust from shining stars that made our faces glow. Life felt so sweet; the earth beneath us must have been illusion. . . . but what did I know? Reality, I learned, was not above those fluffs of clouds, for passion dies so soon, you’re pulled down to the ground. And what of love? It’s just a glimmer up there on the moon. Yet mortals can’t stop wishing for that flight above the clouds into the star-filled night. July 25, 2016

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Date: 4/15/2018 10:38:00 PM
It's all about that flight, Andrea. Congrats on your gold medal finish with this gem.
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:53:00 AM
another thank you to Brian for his open ended contests. First time I've seen this wonderful write Andrea, congrats on the top spot...
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:51:00 AM
another thank you to Brian for his open contests. First time I've seen this one Andrea, beautifully done - so much beautifully tainted passion herein.
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Date: 1/22/2018 9:22:00 PM
Congrats on your well-deserved top win, Andrea!
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Date: 1/22/2018 7:22:00 PM
I do remember this beautiful Sonnet, Andrea! Congratulations on another win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2018 6:47:00 PM
dropping back again with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/22/2018 6:04:00 PM
What a graceful verse. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 1/22/2018 5:37:00 PM
Great to see this again - I*knew* I had read this before. Congrats on another win, Andrea :)
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Date: 8/26/2016 6:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win. This is lovely and elegant, Andrea.
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Date: 8/26/2016 5:25:00 AM
Wow, I simply love this Sonnet. Very well written. Congratulations on your deserving top placement, Andrea. Hugs :~)
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Date: 8/26/2016 4:10:00 AM
Congrats on topping the list!
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Date: 8/26/2016 1:23:00 AM
Lovely dreamy win! Congrats
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Date: 8/26/2016 1:11:00 AM
Very well written:) Congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 8/25/2016 11:17:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win - fantastic flow of words. Mark
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Date: 8/25/2016 9:24:00 PM
Beautifully written Andrea...Congrats on your top win
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Date: 8/25/2016 7:37:00 PM
Andrea, such a lovely, romantic Sonnet, congratulations on your fine win in the this contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/25/2016 2:23:00 PM
Wonderful!! Congratulations..well deserved
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Date: 8/25/2016 12:03:00 PM
So true and so lovely Andrea!Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/25/2016 11:24:00 AM
Dropping back again with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2016 11:09:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win. I love to float on those clouds... Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:51:00 PM
Boy so true on this one Andrea. It is looking at both sides and an excellent write. love phyl
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Date: 10/7/2014 8:54:00 PM
A great argument against monogamy. Of course that is the lean I put on it. I guess because I am not sure we were ever meant to be monogamous. Nature certainly doesn't encourage it. We are after all wired to reproduce. That aside amazing sonnet and God Bless you and your family.
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:55:00 AM
Hi Andrea: Congratulations on your win! Great Prose!
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Date: 8/5/2014 6:37:00 PM
this is a most potently romantic write Andrea love does uplift one hugs
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:58:00 PM
Great! I love it, you took me high! Look how high you could fly, what a winner!
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