About Sunflowers

When I came home, I saw what you had done. 
            Those funny sunflowers 
                                 spontaneously sprung 
and which bordered our drive    a bit    too carelessly, 
             reaching their leafy arms a tad     too far - 
                                                                    you'd cut them down!  

You'd told me on the phone you'd cut the weeds, 
    and I'd been happy about that. . .  until I saw 
              and understood. 
How odd  
   and yet how utterly explicable it seems to me 
that you would look at something bright    and blond    and beaming 
                and see a noxious weed. 

The driveway looks naked now                  and uninviting - 
            similar to how I sometimes see your soul
                       after you cut me 
                          to the core.
 
It's funny about sunflowers. . . they always come back,
         sometimes to a different spot, 
and grinning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Too true, applies even more to dandelions, which will soon be out.
Kauffman Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 11:41 PM
Sad, poignant, filled with wisdom while looking to a new spring with hope. Congratulations on your HM dear friend.
Inman Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Wow, such feeling in this poem Andrea. Getting to know you a bit over the years, I have seen how you seem to prefer to view the beauty and positive side of life, but I have also found subtle but profound deepness inside of you. To me this poem shows the truth of who you are.
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 3:29 PM
I love sunflowers, too, I grow them in my garden every year! This poem is bright and sunny, yet it has a deep sadness that is almost too painful to read about! This poem is terrific, Andrea! I love it! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 10:42 PM
I love how they follow the sun with their faces. Bittersweet poem. I used to live on the seeds, raw and baked with salt. Yum! Great poem!
Jackson Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 5:50 AM
I like your poem and the sunflower theme. I like flowers and gardening and sunflowers are so jolly.Best wishes Linda x
Seal Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Well, nobody messes with your petals and gets away with it do they Petal lol I think those sunflowers going to have the last laugh though. Congratulations on this in the contest. Take care, Richard
Devnath  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 2:18 PM
Superb from every corners,my friend. Loved always, bl
A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 12:13 PM
nice win Andrea, * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~
Ryerson Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:02 AM
Soup mail...
Ryerson Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 5:58 AM
Wow Andrea - I absolutely LOVE this, especially the last verse, comparing the cutting of the sunflowers to the emotional cuts within...Congrats! - Tim
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Andrea. ... CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM!!! awesome :) LUV~ LINDA
Posey Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 4:02 PM
People remark on the beauty of sunflowers while never mentioning the nutrition of their seed..... Congratulations sweet blossom..... Jake
Chircop Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Ow sweet andie..May your sunflowers bloom again..and so the soul.that you find uninviting brings you a bouquet.of love oncd again.This beauty touched my heart maybe even more cause i can relate to such happenings in different situations.Congrat on your win sweet flower of the sun stars and moon
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:19 AM
you are on a roll, andie.. lovely as a bouquet!.. congrats on your winning slot!..:) huggs
Austin Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 8:51 AM
Strange. Van Gogh - one ugly dude - must have identified with the sunflower because he painted them so often. A real classy write, dear Andrea. AS a child I also hacked down sunflowers and am now ashamed Love, daver
Kapoor Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Congrats Andrea on this very assertive, symbolic and beautiful write. Some of its lines project a tone of deep sadness. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Puddifoot Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 5:39 PM
the suspense is over, andrea, and you're a winner! haha those smiley sunflowers are cute...but I detected a dark undertone here...you will see why I placed it jointly with the other one - I felt they were two very different takes on the same theme of damage being inflicted, and I loved that juxtaposition - congrats! :)
Richards Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 1:48 PM
STUNNING !!! lOVED THIS !! again!! wINNER!!
Bauer Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 9:03 AM
wow! this is absolutely a knock-out! you've captured both the beauty of the sunflowers and how betrayed you felt perfectly. i'd feel the same way! ~ thank you for my placement in your contest and for your prompt judging! much appreciated for both...
Lamoureux Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 8:18 AM
Whew this is palpable. My wife loves sun flowers and I hate gardening so the flowers are in no danger *lol*
Lamoureux Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 8:20 AM
I forgot I was coming by to say thanks for placing my poem. Have a good day Andrea.
Undertaker Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 7:44 AM
very well written Andrea. So nice and carries a real meaning. A nice perception of a poet. wonderful. (: ) Jenish.
Peterson Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 11:56 PM
I never cease to be amazed at your range of expressionand facility for uplifting the often overlooked and mundane into the light where they enjoy their due regard.
Mohammed Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 6:33 PM
This is a meaningful piece of writing Andrea. I read this three times before I commented because I really enjoyed this wonderful piece of yours. :)
May Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 5:19 PM
wonderful write Andrea...best wishes
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