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Waltz Wave
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You left me here alone cast aside used goods to be ditched, discarded forsaken and tossed away like lint, though you swore to love me until death do us part. (Waltz Wave) 06/16/2020 Thesaurus - Abandon or Abandoned Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Constance La France

Date: 6/24/2020 7:40:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2020 10:11:00 AM

Thanks Constance, I appreciate the placement and your support my friend, Emile.

V. Deepa

Date: 6/22/2020 12:58:00 PM

Sad and painful poem.:-) Loved your creative work sir. Congratulations on your win..:-)Keep writing. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/22/2020 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Deepa, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 8:17:00 AM

Heartwarming expression of love Emile! Love the way you frame it in Waltz Wave form. Congratulations on your win :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/22/2020 9:02:00 AM

Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your wonderful comments my friend, Emile.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/17/2020 11:29:00 AM

Excellent...Congratulations! Panagiota

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/17/2020 12:11:00 PM

Thanks Panagiota, I appreciate it, Emile.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/16/2020 10:06:00 AM

This is sad and filled with emotions - some so wonderful and some that are so painful. I enjoyed your words. Bless your creative soul with love and more love, Gina

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/16/2020 10:52:00 AM

Thanks Regina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/16/2020 8:59:00 AM

Emotions run deep in this wonderful Waltz Wave Emile. A great entry I think she will love! Blessings xxoo

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/16/2020 9:13:00 AM

Thanks Connie, I always love hearing from you my friend, Emile.