Abandoned

Forgotten, I am a wilted weed tucked between the grass,
Forgotten beyond the sunken morass of overgrown green.    

I once felt like the loveliest wildflower 
in your garden, and I blossomed 
in the sunlight of your ardent hours. 
Bright and bold, 
      my sights were gold 
in exhilaration of you. 
Your exuberance, like April rain, 
showered me down to my roots. 
It quenched our soil but never drained. 
Filling the chasm of our expectations, 
I met your enthusiasm with my own 
eagerness, till the earth flooded in emotion, 
and we almost drowned beneath the ocean 
of our desires. The intensity between us 
felt like a tidal wave, 
       and you were washed away,
                         never looking back. 
Now alone, I wonder what might have been. 
As a black sky rises 
with a white moon again, 
I remember the unique beauty of 
our differences, an untamed union 
          that exploded into dust,
                              dying too soon. 
I imagine you tending to 
your spring garden 
in the infancy of love. 
The gentle fragrance of 
night-blooming jasmine mingled 
with soothing lavender returns, 
     and I burn 
               within, 
wishing   I was still 
the blooming wildflower 
held in your skillful hands,
    but I am the forgotten one
                       deserted by love.
 



Written 6/15/20 for The Thesaurus – Abandon or Abandoned Contest
Sponsor – Dear Heart
*Synonyms for abandon used – forgotten, deserted, exuberance, alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/24/2020 7:35:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem, you are a skilled writer that is quite evident _Constance
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/27/2020 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. That's very sweet of you! Your contests are always inspiring. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/22/2020 8:13:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Rhonda. Much love and blessings :)
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Date: 6/17/2020 7:06:00 AM
This is a heartwarming write Rhonda. Sad yet beautiful. Love how you let it flow. Best wishes for the contest. Love :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:17:00 PM
Thanks Aditi, for another lovely visit! I am truly grateful for your support. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 3:37:00 PM
A lovely penned piece Rhonda, telling well nature and all its effects. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 2:44:00 PM
Quite naturally, pheromones live and die. Cherish the moment! Aloha! Rico
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:16:00 PM
Thanks, Rico! I love your visits. I'm either left smiling or scratching my head...both good. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 8:44:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/your_ocean_450837
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Date: 6/16/2020 8:41:00 AM
What a sumptuous passionate piece. This should do very well. I wrote a piece titled “Your Ocean” that I think you would appreciate.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Rick. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. I'm happy you brought it to my attention. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 7:56:00 AM
Lovely write as always Rhonda! Loved these lines:..I imagine you tending to your spring garden in the infancy of love. ..and I burn within, wishing I was still the blooming wildflower ...says it all!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay...so sweet of you. I am grateful for your visits. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 4:54:00 AM
A poetic rapture of beauty, dearest Rhoda! I loved every word and every verse my friend! Good luck! Hugs xxx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios! I hope you are doing well and are able to enjoy your beautiful garden these days. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/16/2020 3:57:00 AM
Very creative verse Rhonda, you used the alternative words well in your lines. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! It amazes how the sponsors find new and creative ways to challenge us. They are so appreciated as are you. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/15/2020 6:52:00 PM
Wow... This is a incredible poem. I simply love it and wish you a big win! Your words are creative and enlightening and filled with beauty. I enjoyed this so much. Blessings and love sent your way, Gina
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Date: 6/18/2020 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Much love and blessings to you, Rhonda xx
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