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Abandon Farm House

I quietly walk through its abandoned rooms. Softly as a mouse. So as not to disturb or rouse. I try to feel, reach out to past. Sense what has come to pass. I listen intently to the silence. Free my senses from constraint An penance. I slowly walk down its thorough fare. Past rooms of gloom an dusty ceils. Into a kitchen of yore an backdoor. I stop and close my eyes. Reach out to lives cast. Hoping for a vision that lasts Of this farm house, Long past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/14/2021 10:30:00 AM
Very deep feeling of yesterday's dreams having moved on.
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 7/10/2021 10:36:00 PM
Thanks for your comments David, To revisit dreams, we can do anytime but to revisit a dream that has a geographical location, well that is rare indeed. Kind regards
Date: 4/2/2021 9:44:00 AM
Nice! I enjoyed this very much!
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 7/10/2021 10:38:00 PM
Its nice to hear now and then from people that enjoy our poetry, Thank you for taking the time Gregory. Kind regards
Date: 2/15/2021 10:59:00 AM
A pleasure to find your lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Dominic~
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 2/16/2021 11:48:00 PM
It was a pleasure to find a lovely comment about said poem. Thank you LG. Best wishes and kind regards.
Date: 10/18/2018 2:15:00 PM
Hello Dominic, your poem makes me want to explore this abandon farm house. It would be interesting to explore. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2018 12:51:00 PM
Have a nice day my friend.
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Dominic Middleton
Date: 10/22/2018 8:26:00 PM
Thanks Darlene for reading my poetry. Just one comment makes it all worthwhile.

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