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Abandon

I did not know how I should deliver my letter, would leaving it on your doorstep be better? I waited for your call, before I went to the mall. I want to recall all of the good times, but you sound like talking chimes. To maroon me will kill our love I would be better off with a dove. I guess I just need to quit, so we can just split. I will not cry, I am saying good bye. Date Written: 6/15/2020 5 Place Thesaurus - Abandon or Abandoned Contest Judged: 6/21/2020 Sponsored by: A Dear Heart

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Date: 6/24/2020 7:48:00 PM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2020 11:58:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and congratulations. I am honored when I win. We have so many wonderful writers. Have a blessed day............
Date: 6/22/2020 8:29:00 AM
Such an honest and sad tale Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/22/2020 10:08:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and congratulations. I did not know I had won. I am honored when I win. Have a blessed day and week................
Date: 6/17/2020 10:31:00 AM
This is a gem, dear friend. Blessings and love sent your way, Gina
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/17/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thank You, for your note and kind words. Have a wonderful day with blessings.........
Date: 6/17/2020 12:32:00 AM
I really like this. Paula, straight to the point, and a wonderful poem.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/17/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.................

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