Abandon

He left her to her own devices, alone and penniless, without an ounce of confidence. She was a broken woman, little more than a child, yet she was about to give birth. She had never felt more abandoned while tomorrow reserved a challenge she would need to meet head on. she felt a new sway looking up at the moon a transformation Submitted on June 30, 2018 for contest ABANDON 2 sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI - RANKED 1ST

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/27/2018 6:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Excellent!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2018 8:48:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2018 5:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your heartfelt win, Line . I enjoyed reading this well written Haibun with great imagery. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2018 8:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/25/2018 4:56:00 PM

Back to read your emotional poem again, Line. Huge congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/25/2018 5:27:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/25/2018 9:34:00 AM

Beautifully composed heart rendering piece Line, congratulations on your top win! xomo :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/25/2018 2:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/25/2018 8:54:00 AM

You nailed it, congrats on top placement.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/25/2018 2:22:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. Most appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2018 5:12:00 AM

A lovely poem honored with first place and rightfully so! Congratulations on your awesome win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/25/2018 2:22:00 PM

Most appreciated, Connie.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/2/2018 6:46:00 AM

I felt this, even all between the lines. Emotionally striking with a hard-hitting closing Haiku. God bless children having children and all human angels helping them on their path. A joy to read. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2018 6:58:00 AM

A touching and lovely comment, CayCay. Thanks for your visit.

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/1/2018 5:59:00 PM

Oh, so true, Line...the magic of motherhood...unsurpassed. I enjoyed your Haibun and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/1/2018 7:24:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra, for your lovely visit and comment.