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A Zoo Date

The seals were way too noisy; The snakes were fast asleep, The turtles kind of boring And the bison they could keep. The tiger was a hit and so Were rhinos and giraffes And riding on the carousel Made smiles turn into laughs. Flamingos caught attention And some other birds as well But crocodiles, unmoving, Though enormous, didn’t sell. The monkeys jumped too wildly; The deer did not impress, Yet lunch in the café we would Consider a success. A zoo date spent with Henry* On a gloomy afternoon, Though exhausting, makes me hope For more just like it, very soon. *my two-year old grandson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/2/2016 8:06:00 PM
How wonderful when Henry's two, that his grandma takes him to the zoo.
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Date: 12/30/2015 8:07:00 PM
oh my, this is precious, Ilene. Gosh, were you at a zoo in the winter? I hear new york is at 50 degrees, so it could work!! thanks for your sweet words at my poem today and Happy New Year to you.
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:38:00 PM
Oh how sweet. My grandson turned 18 months today and I do so look forward to spending days like this with him... tho he lives far away... Loved this one, Ilene
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:35:00 PM
I'm sure you both had a wonderful day Ilene:-) Here's to many more happy days for you both in 2016:-) hugs Jan xx
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