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A Wrinkled Tale

Three pedal pushers, pushed past, mom, daughter, grand icons of fashions. Forms formed by the dictates of passion. Hair cropped, brows plucked, rural New England’s answer to Dolly Parton. Scooped necked and corseted varying little from teen-queen to matriarch; only the wrinkles told the tale.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 5:50:00 AM

I am stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry today and I wish to thank you for commenting on my poetry. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with much inspiration Debbie. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 10/3/2010 3:33:00 AM

I have seen people like this, clones of each other, from young to old, like you say, only the wrinkles tell them apart.. you captured it beautifully ~~

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/10/2009 4:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! I enjoyed it! Laura :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/10/2009 2:16:00 PM

Dear Light and Love. Deborah,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "A Wrinkled Tale" a very well deserved feature ALWAYS...HG

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/10/2009 1:56:00 AM

Deborah, congrats on your feature...Raul

Oldcrow Poet

Date: 5/9/2009 12:18:00 PM

this is a nice poem. congrats on the feature and thanks for pointing out my typos.

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/5/2009 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/4/2009 10:53:00 AM

So cute, Deborah, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Love, Dane

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/4/2009 9:16:00 AM

Congratulations DEborah on "A Wrinkled Tale" being featured. Vince

James Peranteau

Date: 5/4/2009 8:22:00 AM

Deborah,..another fine write,..congrats being featured ! james

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/4/2009 7:47:00 AM

~lol~ Awesome! Warmest congrats Debbie gal on a most fun featured write! Love, Shar

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/4/2009 4:11:00 AM

Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Diane Christian

Date: 5/4/2009 4:04:00 AM

well written my friend congrats on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane

Brian Strand

Date: 5/4/2009 1:18:00 AM

Congrats on your feature this week Debbie Rgds Brian

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/3/2009 10:12:00 PM

Deborah, congrtaulations on your featured poem. Mine is also featured this week. Ernilando

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/3/2009 5:59:00 PM

Congratulations on this one being featured this week. This has been one of my favs of yours!!!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/14/2009 8:11:00 AM

Absolutely wonderful! What a charming poem with great visuals, as Carrie sad. I love the illiterations! Great write and fun to read! Love and hugs, Robin

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/3/2008 1:05:00 PM

Deborah - I enjoyed your poem - Loved the last two lines and how they held the generations together - Thats what family is all about - God Bless

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/3/2008 12:48:00 PM

Loved this......what a crack-up! The visual...... I can see it clearly!! Good job!..~Carrie