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A Wounded Glass

All alone, on a ground of thorns Sitting coldly with hollow hands I taste the rustiness of time Lonely with a glass of therapy Holding it calmly with a fake smile A diamond breathes in my blood Yet a sharp pin twists in my eyes Born beautiful, until time has exposed the ugliness in my veins My deed etches shattered passion My will torn by the tyranny of weakness Mist in my path, anesthesia in my scream My eyes won't rest until my demon is eliminated He’s here, there, everywhere Twisting his infernal horns of sins in my sentiments I arouse him inside me with flames of lust I beg him to prosper my desire through magnificent satisfaction! Born as the shadow of sins obscures my spirit I am the demon, I am the sin, and I am EVE! Vivo Sadek

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/8/2013 9:22:00 PM
Vivo, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
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Date: 5/5/2013 6:06:00 AM
Welcome to Soup...It is all our pleasure...great poem....
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:45:00 PM
wow...wow..I am impressed... with the ending... and the way you start the poem. I so so love this poem. I know you are new here. But, I defiantly have to favorite this poem, it has nothing to do with this line -->"I am the demon, I am the sin, and I am EVE!" now that's the line of lines. I AM EVE ;-) A diamond breathes in my blood <--- awesome... thanks for the power of thought, when it comes to were one originates. wounds and all.... excellent~ LINDA
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Vivo Sadek
Date: 5/2/2013 11:54:00 AM
hello Linda! i am so pleased to read your comments! this poem in one of my best yet i hope you'll like my coming poems as well:) thank you loads! i am so flattered!!!!
Date: 5/1/2013 7:05:00 AM
Welcome to the soup! This poem is excellent...and I love that ending! I see you must know Eileen...she's a sweetheart.
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Vivo Sadek
Date: 5/2/2013 11:55:00 AM
thank you caleb:) Eileen is more than a sweetheart! she's my inspiration and my best teacher ever:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/1/2013 7:02:00 PM
Awwww...thanks, Caleb. Yes, I do know Eve, and I've been after her to get her work out there. She was a student of mine and is still precious to my heart. Glad you like her work! :)
Date: 5/1/2013 3:13:00 AM
Hello sweety! Here you are with this debut poem! So nice to see you here! :) I need to show you around the site more. Search the links on the left hand side to join some competitions. :) You will love this. I'm so proud of you! Hugs!!!! XO
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2013 12:13:00 PM
That's my girl! :)
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Vivo Sadek
Date: 5/2/2013 11:59:00 AM
hello honey i'm happy i made you proud of me!! yeah i will check the competitions and when i need something i will surely tell you :)

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