Lisa Ricci Poet Free verse

A World Not Over the Rainbow

"a world not over the rainbow"

a world not over the rainbow
yet far away to heal oneself
air and space are clean and free
breezes and suns warm young and old

find a moment within seasons of all
find find a moment for mind body and soul

where is this universe that enhances
look for knowing seagulls flying high
follow them to gentle golden sands
where your being will always soar

a place where soft whispers call
the far and wide breathes for all

SkyWatcher
02-21-22

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M. L. Kiser March 3, 2022 at 4:15 PM Ah...very tranquil imagery and feeling. Lisa Ricci March 21, 2022 at 10:02 AM Hello M. L. Kiser - I am very sorry for the very late response. I've been away from poetrysoup and the computer. Thank you very much for your lovely review and comment. May we all have a beautiful peaceful life. Enjoy your day and poetrysoup.

Bill Baker February 24, 2022 at 2:07 PM Lovely poem, Lisa. My first visit to your poetry, but not my last; I'm following your poetry now. Deep within each of us is a place we can experience as a presence. It can be much like the beautiful place you describe in this poem, or it can be whatever brings pure Love, joy, and happiness to you. I call it the "Garden of Serenity"; some call it "Bliss". Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your gift of poetry, Bill Lisa Ricci February 25, 2022 at 8:53 AM Hello Bill - Hi. It is very nice to meet you. It is I who thanks you for stumbling upon my page and work. I am very honored by your commentary and review. I do not take reviews or comments for granted. I want to thank you for your input and intake that truly enhances my entry itself. Truly. Have a wonderful weekend and keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. Blessings...

Anil Deo February 23, 2022 at 6:53 PM Over and Not Over the rainbow, O Lions, Tigers, and bears Dorothy, and tinman with a heart. Wonderful world of Oz. I needed that Lisa Lisa Lisa. Shalom shalom shalom dear friend Lisa Ricci February 24, 2022 at 4:53 AM Well Now Mr. Anil - Top of the day to you... - Yes, not over the rainbow (smile). Thank your for the smile your commentary brings because it does. I love the movie wizard of oz and yes all the characters for what they symbolize including the black bag too. May the black bag hold everything for you including Shaloms and Namastes... Remain safe and well. Love and Blessings always.

Tom Cunningham February 23, 2022 at 1:46 PM If we just close our eyes and just drift off to that heavenly place, our spirits will be lifted. Hope your day is going well Lisa. Tom Lisa Ricci February 24, 2022 at 4:47 AM Good Morning Tom - You are a doll. Thank you very much for such a wonderful review and commentary that enhances the entry itself. I love the ocean and beaches and golden sands. There is no place on earth like it. Have a wonderful morning and keep enjoying poetrysoup. Blessings always. (smile)

Alexis Y. February 23, 2022 at 10:12 AM Wow! Lisa, This is lovely. You gave sage advice in your well-written verse. Good title and content.Well done. I hope your New Year is going well thus far. Have a great day-Alexis Lisa Ricci February 24, 2022 at 4:44 AM Hello Alexis - Good Morning. So nice to see you. Thank you for visiting my page and entry and for such a wonderful and generous review to which I never take for granted. The new year has come through strong in many ways. Have a wonderful morning and day. May this day find you well. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. (smile)

Deb M February 23, 2022 at 7:39 AM Really lovely Lisa….I was flying high with those seagulls! Debx Lisa Ricci February 24, 2022 at 4:41 AM Good Morning Deb - Hi. Thank you ever so much. Truly. I'm glad you flew with the seagulls (smile). May we all do. There is no place on earth like the ocean the beach or golden sands. Have a beautiful morning and day. Love and Blessings...