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A World Not Over the Rainbow

"a world not over the rainbow" a world not over the rainbow yet far away to heal oneself air and space are clean and free breezes and suns warm young and old find a moment within seasons of all find find a moment for mind body and soul where is this universe that enhances look for knowing seagulls flying high follow them to gentle golden sands where your being will always soar a place where soft whispers call the far and wide breathes for all SkyWatcher 02-21-22

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Date: 3/3/2022 4:15:00 PM
Ah...very tranquil imagery and feeling.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/21/2022 10:02:00 AM
Hello M. L. Kiser - I am very sorry for the very late response. I've been away from poetrysoup and the computer. Thank you very much for your lovely review and comment. May we all have a beautiful peaceful life. Enjoy your day and poetrysoup.
Date: 2/24/2022 2:07:00 PM
Lovely poem, Lisa. My first visit to your poetry, but not my last; I'm following your poetry now. Deep within each of us is a place we can experience as a presence. It can be much like the beautiful place you describe in this poem, or it can be whatever brings pure Love, joy, and happiness to you. I call it the "Garden of Serenity"; some call it "Bliss". Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your gift of poetry, Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/25/2022 8:53:00 AM
Hello Bill - Hi. It is very nice to meet you. It is I who thanks you for stumbling upon my page and work. I am very honored by your commentary and review. I do not take reviews or comments for granted. I want to thank you for your input and intake that truly enhances my entry itself. Truly. Have a wonderful weekend and keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. Blessings...
Date: 2/23/2022 6:53:00 PM
Over and Not Over the rainbow, O Lions, Tigers, and bears Dorothy, and tinman with a heart. Wonderful world of Oz. I needed that Lisa Lisa Lisa. Shalom shalom shalom dear friend
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/24/2022 4:53:00 AM
Well Now Mr. Anil - Top of the day to you... - Yes, not over the rainbow (smile). Thank your for the smile your commentary brings because it does. I love the movie wizard of oz and yes all the characters for what they symbolize including the black bag too. May the black bag hold everything for you including Shaloms and Namastes... Remain safe and well. Love and Blessings always.
Date: 2/23/2022 1:46:00 PM
If we just close our eyes and just drift off to that heavenly place, our spirits will be lifted. Hope your day is going well Lisa. Tom
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/24/2022 4:47:00 AM
Good Morning Tom - You are a doll. Thank you very much for such a wonderful review and commentary that enhances the entry itself. I love the ocean and beaches and golden sands. There is no place on earth like it. Have a wonderful morning and keep enjoying poetrysoup. Blessings always. (smile)
Date: 2/23/2022 10:12:00 AM
Wow! Lisa, This is lovely. You gave sage advice in your well-written verse. Good title and content.Well done. I hope your New Year is going well thus far. Have a great day-Alexis
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/24/2022 4:44:00 AM
Hello Alexis - Good Morning. So nice to see you. Thank you for visiting my page and entry and for such a wonderful and generous review to which I never take for granted. The new year has come through strong in many ways. Have a wonderful morning and day. May this day find you well. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. (smile)
Date: 2/23/2022 7:39:00 AM
Really lovely Lisa….I was flying high with those seagulls! Debx
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/24/2022 4:41:00 AM
Good Morning Deb - Hi. Thank you ever so much. Truly. I'm glad you flew with the seagulls (smile). May we all do. There is no place on earth like the ocean the beach or golden sands. Have a beautiful morning and day. Love and Blessings...

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