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A Wondrous Gift

As daylight breaks and wildlife wakes a morning mist forms o’er the lakes; with constant drive sun’s rays arrive, and all of nature comes alive. As morn unfolds, sun’s beams behold, and bathe the hills in shades of gold. The birds in trees, whose songs appease, will revel in the morning breeze. ‘tis in the field that nature’s yield, the flowers’ beauty is revealed, and in the skies an eagle flies repeating soft this rhyme’s reprise. I look around and hear the sound as all of nature is abound; this verdant sod on which I trod, a lovely wondrous gift of God.
August 13, 2020

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Date: 10/30/2020 2:30:00 PM
Two of my favourite things nature and wildlife. I am lucky to have countryside around me and enjoy all its splendour. Love this and your flow John, Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/30/2020 6:02:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Emilia, I live in a large city and am envious of anyone surrounded by countryside. Have a great weekend. John
Date: 9/22/2020 12:53:00 PM
Reading this gave me such a happy feeling, John. I loved the rhythmic flow and I could vividly picture the wonderful blessings in life which you describe so beautifully. This was such an uplifting read.
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/22/2020 1:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy, I'm glad you enjoyed it. There's nothing better than an early morning walk to clear the mind and cleanse the spirit. All the best. John
Date: 8/27/2020 9:53:00 AM
Hi John, You have made me nostalgic for a visit to the Kruger National Park which has just opened to the public - nature at its best as you describe it, beautiful and the earlier you get up and greet the morn, the more you see, - your poem describes the treasures of nature - I loved it and have faved it. Well penned John hugs and blessings Jenn.
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/27/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Jenn. When you go to the park, take lots of photos and post them, I would love to see what you described. Thank you for saving this poem as a favorite my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 8/25/2020 4:29:00 PM
Moving verses about this truly magnificent world, John Panagiota xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/26/2020 4:26:00 AM
We are blessed with the beauty that surrounds us, thank you, Pangie, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 8/18/2020 12:01:00 AM
You have wonderful descriptiveness and rhyming in this piece.
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/18/2020 2:37:00 AM
Thanks so much, Robert, I appreciate it. John
Date: 8/13/2020 9:00:00 PM
Yes, the internal rhyme here flows like a soothing melody. It is the simplicity of your words that leave me in awe. Simply breathtaking indeed. This is beautiful in every way. :) Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/14/2020 1:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Brandy, I always appreciate your support. Hugs, John
Date: 8/13/2020 6:20:00 PM
Don't quite know how you do it, John, but every poem more enchanted and enchanting than the previous one. FAVE! Blessings, Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/13/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thanks so much for your gracious comments, Gershon, and for the fave. I appreciate you. John
Date: 8/13/2020 4:33:00 PM
this is a gorgeous poem, John. Is it for the nature contest?
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/13/2020 5:28:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I wrote this for the nature contest.
Date: 8/13/2020 10:15:00 AM
I love internal rhyme and this is an excellent example, I love how it rolls off the tongue when read out loud. Nature is a wondrous gift, and so is this poem, a fave for me!
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/13/2020 10:31:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it. I like writing these internal rhymes, it takes a little longer to write but I enjoy the challenge. Thanks for the fave, Cheers, John
Date: 8/13/2020 10:03:00 AM
Hi John, beautiful nature poem. Enjoyed Belden.
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/13/2020 10:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, Belden, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 8/13/2020 7:12:00 AM
Natural beauty all around us John, the wonders of creation, im sat on a beach cliffs on my left, seagulls squawking, nature is indeed all around us, we just have to open our eyes to it. Wonderful flowing rhyme. Good luck in the contest Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/13/2020 7:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Tom. Sounds like you're in a good place right now, wish I could join you. Have a great day. John
Date: 8/13/2020 4:16:00 AM
You're rhyme scheme is appreciated by me, John. I know it takes time and diligence for double rhyming. Nicely written poem about the beauty of Nature.
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/13/2020 4:21:00 AM
Good morning, Jenna, thanks for noticing my rhyme scheme, I appreciate that. It does take a little more time to do this but I like to challenge myself once in a while. Looks like I made it just under the wire for the contest. Hugs, John

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