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A Woman Cannot Always Leave

If a man is hurt by love he just up and leaves - becomes a recluse Finds a shack somewhere by a pond in the woods But a woman cannot always leave she has her family her pride of porcelain She tends the stove for them cooks over the heat her thoughts directed inward From December to December she tends them A recluse in her heart Come December when a pond somewhere is covered in ice an old man remembers he laments his days as a recluse with just a stove for heat the memory of her never leaves him a memory as icy-cool as her porcelain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/17/2014 9:51:00 PM
wowowow, this is really good, Suz. Long time no see. Sure wish you would visit me more often. This one is so full of truth too. The woman just can't think to pack up and leave. Too many things are part of her world. And often the man makes it impossible for her. I have seen this so many times!!
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Date: 4/4/2014 7:13:00 AM
Good poem
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Date: 4/3/2014 5:00:00 PM
seems i read it before but it was meant for today. i was wronged yesterday and I'm thinking of leaving.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/3/2014 9:19:00 PM
Sometimes just saying you are leaving shifts the power...but be sure it is you she will miss and not what you can do for her.
Date: 2/26/2014 7:21:00 AM
I like the green eye. I'm looking to see if. .. well checking your poems this morning.
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Date: 2/1/2014 3:51:00 AM
I'm a bachelor and used to my own company but many of my mates are married and I have asked them what they would deem to be the hardest thing to cope with in marriage . Particularly after a row . Silence seems to be pretty much a universal answer . I love silence and can't see it myself but the guys seem pretty genuine. Superb poem. Thank you
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/2/2014 1:33:00 AM
I love silence too. Must be a trait poets need. LOL
Date: 1/31/2014 6:58:00 AM
This makes one think. To be a recluse in actuality or only inside. Both versions are incredibly sad.
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Date: 1/28/2014 8:02:00 PM
Suz, deep...SKAT
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