A Winter's Chill

A winter’s chill has taken hold -
a grip that cannot be controlled.
And with it, creeping, comes a dread
which, having settled in my head,
has brought me back to things foretold. . . . 

to things I’d learned before the cold.
Long time before my growing old,
I could not grasp there lay ahead. . . 
a winter’s chill.

For in my youth, I was cajoled
by hope’s sweet voice, and all was gold.
Recalling Scriptures that I read
and seeing sanity now fled,
I see before my eyes unfold. . .
a winter’s chill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Austin Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Youth issometimes favored in that they don't look ahead - it can be chilly and ugly. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Kimathi Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 6:29 AM
A very enjoyable piece.... Congrats Andrea, for having it featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
Salehi Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Andrea congratulations on the poem of the week after six years....
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Your Choice Once More contest Andrea. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 1:23 AM
WOW! ANDREA,,, CONGRATULATIONS, in BRIANS ;-) contest,. YOU WIN LOTS,, AND LOTS..LUV~.p.d.
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win with this awesome poem.---Lori
Dufresne Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 5:20 PM
excellent Andrea, congratulations to you on your # 1with this Rondeau
Song Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Andrea~love the flowing lines of rhyme...congrats on this winning write... I am chilled! :) Gwendolen
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November 11, 2011 at 11:47 AM
Very nice description and flow in your poem, Andrea. Congratulations on taking first place in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 11:18 AM
Lovely, Andrea....this would do well in Francine's contest too!!?? Loved it!
Crisci Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 10:31 AM
My big congratulations on your fantastic win, Andrea in Brian Strand's contest, " Your choice Once more " Amazing are the lines of the second stanza, " For in my youth, I was cajoled by hope's sweet voice, and all was gold. " Andrea, I have felt this emotion very often. Thanks for your comments...they are encouraging and uplifting! I wish you all the best. Hugs, Andrew.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Congrats Andrea on a fantastic first place win my friend with these amazing lines of poetry ..always wonderful...
Chachere Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 12:14 PM
i nearly freezed. great write<: and not all my love poems are based on one person, but two. thats funny, he's a poet&writer too. but doesn't reveal it. i really should go on, because,some times i feel like i want to be alone or i already am. but also the thing is, many guys don't interest me as much because i don't see anything in them really. so its always hard for me to see one. i never look. but as i said, i've seen two that interest me enough. and i am a sophmore in hs.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Gosh, I hope you are not heading towards winter yet Andrea....I am still considering myself in my Autumn and I am ahead of you...I enjoyed your Rondeau. Mahalo, Connie
Thekidster Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Andrea, A Winter's Chill was wonderfil ("wonderfil" is not a typo. I just needed to rhyme). Great Job. Fantastic job for a first timer. Best Wishes Always, Bill
Moreno Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 3:11 AM
Nice form Andrea, loved the first stanza...Raul
Sweetheart Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 8:25 PM
Just a quick hello to u my friend Andrea and thankxxx for thinking of me while I have been away from Soup by your great comments on my poetry.. I will try to catch up soon as this trial is over and read all u wrote... congrats on your winnings in the contests too... great job ...great writes... great friend... luv.. Linda-Marie.. talk soon.
Foster Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 6:11 PM
Wow! this is fantastic. ' things foretold' unfolding in later life. what a great job, it was a pure pleasure to read. keep up the good work :) ...Margaret
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January 17, 2010 at 5:37 PM
Dear Andrea, I feel a special bond between us I just read YOUR SOUP Mail (which YOU can check in about 10 minutes I really enjoyed the line " Recalling Scriptures that I read " I Bow to YOUR POETIC TALENT, Upon YOUR head : A Wonderful Crown of Laurel :From me "The GOLDEN PEN OF POETRY" ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
Arnold Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Andrea you have done an outstanding job on this wonderful flowing rhythmic read. Bravo!! Thank you for your review on Sugarland I have painted some great artwork that goes between each verse but cannot enter them here as you know. Thanks again Love Cookie
Fraser Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 3:25 PM
Wonderful attempt Andrea, i promised myself i would expand my form portfolio this year, and i like this form >> thank you for sharing >> James
Hilliker Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Beautiful! You did a great job!
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January 17, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Awesome! Andrea! Great composition, form and rhyming! Enjoyed reading today. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems. No, "shadows in the the windows" is not for the paranormal contest. There was nothing paranormal to it. :) thanks again for reading my poetry. Best wishes, Caroline.
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January 17, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Beautiful read but winter hasn't been beautiful this year.Most parents don't think about the name they put on a child.How aout this one Ralphie Roche a friend named her son this.Thanks for reading this.Teresa
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January 17, 2010 at 9:32 AM
You sure had me looking up what a rondeau is--I remember you mentioning it to me before--and wow, it does seem challenging and you did a great job! I have yet to try my hand at this, but your Winter Chill is inspiring...thanks for sharing this, Andrea :) keep writing!!!
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