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A Winter's Chill

A winter’s chill has taken hold - a grip that cannot be controlled. And with it, creeping, comes a dread which, having settled in my head, has brought me back to things foretold. . . . to things I’d learned before the cold. Long time before my growing old, I could not grasp there lay ahead. . . a winter’s chill. For in my youth, I was cajoled by hope’s sweet voice, and all was gold. Recalling Scriptures that I read and seeing sanity now fled, I see before my eyes unfold. . . a winter’s chill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/16/2016 2:29:00 PM
Youth issometimes favored in that they don't look ahead - it can be chilly and ugly. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 6/14/2016 6:29:00 AM
A very enjoyable piece.... Congrats Andrea, for having it featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 6/13/2016 12:40:00 AM
Andrea congratulations on the poem of the week after six years....
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Date: 11/16/2011 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Your Choice Once More contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2011 1:23:00 AM
WOW! ANDREA,,, CONGRATULATIONS, in BRIANS ;-) contest,. YOU WIN LOTS,, AND LOTS..LUV~.p.d.
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Date: 11/12/2011 6:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win with this awesome poem.---Lori
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Date: 11/11/2011 5:20:00 PM
excellent Andrea, congratulations to you on your # 1with this Rondeau
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Date: 11/11/2011 4:14:00 PM
Andrea~love the flowing lines of rhyme...congrats on this winning write... I am chilled! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 11/11/2011 11:47:00 AM
Very nice description and flow in your poem, Andrea. Congratulations on taking first place in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/11/2011 11:18:00 AM
Lovely, Andrea....this would do well in Francine's contest too!!?? Loved it!
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Date: 11/11/2011 10:31:00 AM
My big congratulations on your fantastic win, Andrea in Brian Strand's contest, " Your choice Once more " Amazing are the lines of the second stanza, " For in my youth, I was cajoled by hope's sweet voice, and all was gold. " Andrea, I have felt this emotion very often. Thanks for your comments...they are encouraging and uplifting! I wish you all the best. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 11/11/2011 9:36:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on a fantastic first place win my friend with these amazing lines of poetry ..always wonderful...
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:14:00 PM
i nearly freezed. great write<: and not all my love poems are based on one person, but two. thats funny, he's a poet&writer too. but doesn't reveal it. i really should go on, because,some times i feel like i want to be alone or i already am. but also the thing is, many guys don't interest me as much because i don't see anything in them really. so its always hard for me to see one. i never look. but as i said, i've seen two that interest me enough. and i am a sophmore in hs.
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Date: 1/24/2010 5:49:00 PM
Gosh, I hope you are not heading towards winter yet Andrea....I am still considering myself in my Autumn and I am ahead of you...I enjoyed your Rondeau. Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 1/23/2010 5:11:00 PM
Andrea, A Winter's Chill was wonderfil ("wonderfil" is not a typo. I just needed to rhyme). Great Job. Fantastic job for a first timer. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:11:00 AM
Nice form Andrea, loved the first stanza...Raul
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:25:00 PM
Just a quick hello to u my friend Andrea and thankxxx for thinking of me while I have been away from Soup by your great comments on my poetry.. I will try to catch up soon as this trial is over and read all u wrote... congrats on your winnings in the contests too... great job ...great writes... great friend... luv.. Linda-Marie.. talk soon.
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:11:00 PM
Wow! this is fantastic. ' things foretold' unfolding in later life. what a great job, it was a pure pleasure to read. keep up the good work :) ...Margaret
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Date: 1/17/2010 5:37:00 PM
Dear Andrea, I feel a special bond between us I just read YOUR SOUP Mail (which YOU can check in about 10 minutes I really enjoyed the line " Recalling Scriptures that I read " I Bow to YOUR POETIC TALENT, Upon YOUR head : A Wonderful Crown of Laurel :From me "The GOLDEN PEN OF POETRY" ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:29:00 PM
Andrea you have done an outstanding job on this wonderful flowing rhythmic read. Bravo!! Thank you for your review on Sugarland I have painted some great artwork that goes between each verse but cannot enter them here as you know. Thanks again Love Cookie
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Date: 1/17/2010 3:25:00 PM
Wonderful attempt Andrea, i promised myself i would expand my form portfolio this year, and i like this form >> thank you for sharing >> James
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Date: 1/17/2010 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful! You did a great job!
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Date: 1/17/2010 1:50:00 PM
Awesome! Andrea! Great composition, form and rhyming! Enjoyed reading today. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems. No, "shadows in the the windows" is not for the paranormal contest. There was nothing paranormal to it. :) thanks again for reading my poetry. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/17/2010 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful read but winter hasn't been beautiful this year.Most parents don't think about the name they put on a child.How aout this one Ralphie Roche a friend named her son this.Thanks for reading this.Teresa
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Date: 1/17/2010 9:32:00 AM
You sure had me looking up what a rondeau is--I remember you mentioning it to me before--and wow, it does seem challenging and you did a great job! I have yet to try my hand at this, but your Winter Chill is inspiring...thanks for sharing this, Andrea :) keep writing!!!
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