A Winter Story

Relentless water With time sculpts a rocky tale Ice blue stories told For Raul's latest contest

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/7/2010 5:56:00 AM

Great Haiku, just great! Winter can tell us so many different stories! And I appreciate your comment on my Senryu "After Midnight". When I stayed at Kibbutz Erez in the 70's, one of my best friends there came from Japan (also a volunteer) and he wrote very nice poetry. Senryus and Haikus leave us with plenty space of consideration and thoughts. Keep your pen flowing! Have a good time...Gert

Susan Palli

Date: 3/4/2010 1:20:00 PM

Excellent! Susan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2010 4:57:00 PM

A refreshingly original description of the photo, Barbara. Two thumbs up for this great haiku! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 2/27/2010 2:39:00 PM

Lovely wintry Haiku Barbara >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/27/2010 2:18:00 PM

Yours is a winner too, I'm sure, and Ilike to think of time as sculpting a rocky tale. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

Date: 2/26/2010 12:54:00 PM

Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts on the picture. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing!! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/26/2010 9:26:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us I enjoyed reading it today. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Barbara. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/26/2010 12:25:00 AM

this is such a nice winter story! really liked your 2nd and last lines--wish you all the best in the contest, Barbara :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2010 9:47:00 PM

VERY nice, Barbara, yes the limericks are all a hoot, aren't they? Good luck in this contest! Luv, Andrea

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/25/2010 7:41:00 PM

Very nice Haiku, describing well the picture. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.