A Winter Storm Speaks

I am a furious force
you dare not reckon with when I am at my peak!
Assassin of startled vegetation,
I attack with no mercy or compassion.
Limbs of trees – laden with snowfall that I bring - 
snap off as easily as heads of dolls
in the hands of a psychotic child.
Such is the magnitude of my strength
at the mere exhalation of my frigid blustering breath.

I roar and I rush, and in my path of blinding white,
some on foot have lost their way -
later to be discovered (if found at all)
frozen like human popsicles, some yet to even thaw.

Most vehicles on highways have no chance with me.
Zig-zagging off roads, they land in snowdrifts.
Tires spin uselessly, and for a time,
these machines of great convenience are temporarily doomed
as their occupants shiver from cold and fear.

At my zenith, I howl and I rant relentlessly.
Pray that should you meet me
that you are not too far from any buildings.
Pray too that if you should cross my path
that you will not be stuck upon a mountain.
There is where I reign supreme,
shrouding frozen creeks, pines and rocks of cliffs
with my snowy showy glory.

Dec. 29, 2022
for the "Winter Storm" Poetry Contest of  Kim Rodrigues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Puddifoot Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 1:55 PM
i really like how you did this, andrea, personifying the storm - congrats on your win in the contest!
Fowler Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Brrrr Andrea! A force to be reckoned with! Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 8:03 PM
Truly a furious force, Andrea! Congratulations on your placement in my contest!
Daniel Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 1:59 AM
Another wonderful poem, Andrea, exceptional use of personification and imagery:)
Maverick Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 5:45 AM
You do justice to the elemental force That is part of creation and destruction In the world we inhabit Andrea.' As always Great result from your much talented intellect.'
Horsman Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 9:06 PM
Like the verbosity here, Andrea, the whole poem powerful and uncompromising. Blessing for 2023. Harry.
Ashley Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 5:23 PM
Dear Andrea, your vivid imagery is fierce and fearsome and the personification vibrant! Such a dynamic force, both the winter storm and your mighty poetic pen! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend. Happy new year! ~Susan
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December 29, 2022 at 4:22 PM
Enjoyed reading this wonderful poem, Andrea. Your imagery associated with great diction shed more beautiful layers to your poetry. Best wishes for the contest.
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