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A Winter Sleep

I wake, to frosty air upon my face As I lay, in down encased I gaze upon the nylon’s glow This morning light that signals snow Reflected by the outside cover Which still falls, I soon discover I hear it drop upon my tent The softest touch, as fingertips It slips and falls and piles high From my shelter to my delight I yearn to move and start my day But cold crisp air bodes well to wait Strange, you may think to sleep like this Strange, you don’t, I must insist To see such beauty, with its virgin hue And I, like the first man, this forest knew To leave a trail and step alone And blaze a path and travel home Even now with covers tight I wouldn’t trade for warm sunlight With spring comes the awful crowd Who have never heard the winter’s howl And never seen the stars so bright Or the moonlit snow on a winter’s night They will never know the forest’s grace That comes from waking, with frosty air upon your face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/5/2022 7:30:00 PM
I really love the beauty your imagery presents in this lovely poem Justin. I can see why this has a high placement. Just gorgeous! Congratulations! New year blessings xxoo
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Justin Clason
Date: 1/6/2022 2:36:00 AM
Thank you Connie, and you too.
Date: 1/5/2022 7:05:00 PM
Splendidly written poem congrats on your win dear Justin:)
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Justin Clason
Date: 1/6/2022 2:35:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/5/2022 5:13:00 PM
Justin, Your poem stirred my heart because I love nature, too. One of my sons and his friend used to go sleep in their tent in the wild ~ snowing or not, and I've many times slept under the stars. Congratulations on your win!
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Justin Clason
Date: 1/5/2022 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Ann. Sleeping under the stars is as close to nature as it gets.
Date: 1/5/2022 12:28:00 PM
This contest would have been so difficult to judge. Such amazing, inspiring work. Great imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Justin Clason
Date: 1/5/2022 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Joanna. I’m surprised to have done so well. Lot of other great poems.
Date: 1/5/2022 9:58:00 AM
I love the feeling of a biting wind on my face, particularly early morning. Great descriptive work Justin. Cheers - Gary
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Justin Clason
Date: 1/5/2022 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Gary. There Are times I really enjoy winter.
Date: 3/31/2018 2:30:00 PM
Love the imagery. I felt as if I were there.
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Justin Clason
Date: 1/5/2022 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Anna. I was hoping I could express it right.
Date: 3/29/2018 4:22:00 AM
This brought me straight to that cold sharp air I have not thought about for 50 years. Thank you Justin.
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Justin Clason
Date: 1/5/2022 4:20:00 PM
Thank you, I’m glad you liked it.
Date: 8/19/2017 3:17:00 PM
Fabulous pen! You have captured that crisp beauty elegantly.
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Date: 8/19/2017 1:23:00 PM
So many of your lines are creatively written, Justin. Your second stanza is my favorite. I feel I should apologize for the debacle you witnessed this morning since it was over someone trying to belittle my name. I hope you stay because your poetry is worthy of being read.
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Justin Clason
Date: 8/19/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Lin. And It wasn't your fault, I'm glad I stayed because I really think this page is good. It was disappointing to see that kind of thing.
Date: 8/19/2017 11:56:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Justin Clason
Date: 8/19/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Dale.

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