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A Well Filled Life

I opened up the daily yesterday and turned to the obituary page. A friend of mine looked back at me from there. He'd died at ninety years and one of age. I cried out with surprise and wondering. How can this world survive if he is gone? Capsuled was his life in a few columns. "How can this be?" I ask, as I read on. He'd lived his whole life in this small valley, except when he was stationed in Japan, during oft forgot war of Korea, in battles never mentioned by the man. We met when we worked at the county fair. He was the manager and I a clerk. He always treated me as his equal and complimented me on my fine work. Until retirement he was a banker and in that role met everyone in town. Without good reason none were sent away and there were very few that he turned down. For seventy-five years a Grange member and served that time in all capacities. An usher in his church for forty years, he lived his life the loving Lord to please. He even owned a small menagerie and welcomed throngs of children to his place. I know that God will have big jobs for him as he arrives with smile upon his face. Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 1/13/2015 12:00:00 PM
Great job Joyce ..Merry Christmas,,,Happy New Year,,, and all the others I've missed... and many more to come,,,God bless,,,, and may many more enjoyable times be in your future... Agape Moses!
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Date: 12/26/2014 9:23:00 PM
Joyce, CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2014 10:09:00 AM
It is such a hard thing to lose a friend, but your poem brought him such honor, Joyce. What a lovely tribute this is. Congratulations and Holiday blessings to you!
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Date: 12/17/2014 9:14:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to this man Joyce. I'm sure heaven rejoices as he enters in. Congratulations on your win and have a blessed Christmas.
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Date: 12/17/2014 5:29:00 PM
A very touching story:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:55:00 AM
Very emotional and touchy write, congratulations on the win
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Date: 12/16/2014 2:32:00 PM
A very touching story, congratulations.
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Date: 11/16/2014 4:16:00 PM
Dear Joyce, He sounds like a remarkable man. (I don't forget Korea; John was a Korean War veteran.) It is always hard to come to grips with the death of a good friend. Just this year I lost Elaine, a friend of decades. Your meter is perfect, but more than that, your story is captivating. We all have experiences like this, but it takes an artist like you to make others feel what you have felt. Love you always, carolyn
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Date: 11/15/2014 9:20:00 PM
The man's legacy lives on with the people he has touched -- you are one of them! From your words I can see he was a mighty warrior in faith. All the very best.
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