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~ Prepare my sons, a reckoning portends in magnitude that quells our force at hand. Lay low thy heads and pray the lance extends beyond the sword thine enemies command. Pray not to fear, for fear is but a chain that fetters dread and shackles in disgrace. Pray wounds from battle levy no disdain, and in His name, let dying be with grace. When death befalls, let valor lie in state then gallantly release thy mortal strife, pray heaven’s arms shall lead us to His gate to lend our souls to everlasting life. Behold the fury, face this foe as one, for glory waits beyond the rising sun. 9-10-2020 Mark Toney Marathon Contest 5

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Date: 7/4/2022 5:09:00 AM
Wow! Great work! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/4/2022 3:22:00 AM
Mark, you have a writing style that I've always admired. It's archaically grand, and your vocabulary adds to the quality of your poetry. Congratulations on another well written entry.
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Date: 7/3/2022 2:06:00 PM
A wonderful sonnet Mark! Congratulations on a much deserved win! Good luck the rest of the way!
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Date: 7/3/2022 11:23:00 AM
Magnificent rhyming poem on theme of warriors, Mark. This has a classic poetry tone to it! Congrats on a top win
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Date: 7/2/2022 6:37:00 PM
Such brave beauty shines from the prayerful heart of your moving sonnet. Exquisite poetry, Mark. The courageous spirit and the spiritual courage of your poem brings me to the center of this last stand. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/2/2022 1:30:00 PM
A truly inspiring sonnet, Mark. Congratulations on your second-place, podium finish on Mile 5 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 6 has already started, and guess what? You're currently in 4th position overall! You can find the current standings in my blog post.
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Date: 7/2/2022 12:11:00 PM
A beautifully composed sonnet, Mark. If I were a warrior I would carry these words with me and read them before every battle. A fav for me, congratulations on your win today ~ John
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Date: 9/26/2020 3:18:00 PM
So beautiful, Mark! A prayer, a praise...onward!
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Date: 9/11/2020 2:41:00 AM
Heya, Mark. I'm assured of the morale boost your men will receive from hearing this war cry. Specific in direction, spiritual in nature. An extremely firm entry, bound to be listed with winners.
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Mark Massey
Date: 9/11/2020 4:54:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Sigrid, I appreciate the note.

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