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A Walk With My Thoughts

Grief
Quiet
My thoughts wander
Feet walk the path
Trials of life fade beneath the canopy

lifelovetetractys

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 23, 2009 at 5:05 AM

Congratulations, Barbara, on your success in Constance’s “A Walk to Remember” contest with this insightful poem. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 18, 2009 at 7:21 PM

My Dearest Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Honorable Mention in Constance's Contest Excellently Penned FOREVER YOURS...HG

Trudy Diane Rider

October 18, 2009 at 12:42 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest! ~Trudy~

Elaine George

October 17, 2009 at 6:39 AM

Incredible Tetractys! Barbara. congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

October 17, 2009 at 2:44 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest BG.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

October 16, 2009 at 5:45 PM

Congratulations Barbara, with this wonderful winning poem!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 16, 2009 at 3:16 PM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

P Sheart

October 16, 2009 at 3:12 PM

Hi Barbara, Congrats on your win! Love Light Truth Patty

Raul Moreno

October 16, 2009 at 2:47 PM

BG, congratulations on your success in the contest...Raul

Brian Strand

October 14, 2009 at 12:59 AM

Excellent work BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words

Constance La France

October 13, 2009 at 11:58 AM

Beautiful and so true..

Corinne Curcio

October 13, 2009 at 8:09 AM

This is an excellent - and beautiful piece - Good luck in the contest, Barbara - and thanks for your comments :-)

John Freeman

October 12, 2009 at 6:09 PM

Amazing Tetractys. A simple walk can do wonders sometimes. Good job, Sincerely, Love, moses

Brian Strand

October 11, 2009 at 11:48 PM

Excellent final line Bg.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Elaine George

October 11, 2009 at 4:05 PM

A MASTERPIECE! To my fav's love, Lainie

James Marshall Goff

October 11, 2009 at 6:10 AM

beautiful walk of peace! BG!... and thanks for congrats!... jim

Jared Pickett

October 9, 2009 at 10:43 PM

I love this form.... Awesome write here Barbara.....:JP]

Marty Owens

October 9, 2009 at 7:49 PM

Wow Barbara this is nice. Reminds me of walking on a mountain trail for some reason...Thanks for it...Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

October 9, 2009 at 6:53 PM

Sometimes when I am walking along the beach, I "air out" negative thoughts and emotions. In your woodland canopy, it appears you are able to do the same. This is a very healthy approach to life. Wish some of the troubled young souls could see the value of this catharsis. Very profound, LNC! Love you, Carolyn