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A Walk With My Thoughts

Grief Quiet My thoughts wander Feet walk the path Trials of life fade beneath the canopy

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 5:05:00 AM

Congratulations, Barbara, on your success in Constance’s “A Walk to Remember” contest with this insightful poem. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/18/2009 7:21:00 PM

My Dearest Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Honorable Mention in Constance's Contest Excellently Penned FOREVER YOURS...HG

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/18/2009 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest! ~Trudy~

Elaine George

Date: 10/17/2009 6:39:00 AM

Incredible Tetractys! Barbara. congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/17/2009 2:44:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest BG.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2009 5:45:00 PM

Congratulations Barbara, with this wonderful winning poem!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2009 3:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Barbara. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 10/16/2009 3:12:00 PM

Hi Barbara, Congrats on your win! Love Light Truth Patty

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/16/2009 2:47:00 PM

BG, congratulations on your success in the contest...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 10/14/2009 12:59:00 AM

Excellent work BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words

Constance La France

Date: 10/13/2009 11:58:00 AM

Beautiful and so true..

Corinne Curcio

Date: 10/13/2009 8:09:00 AM

This is an excellent - and beautiful piece - Good luck in the contest, Barbara - and thanks for your comments :-)

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2009 6:09:00 PM

Amazing Tetractys. A simple walk can do wonders sometimes. Good job, Sincerely, Love, moses

Brian Strand

Date: 10/11/2009 11:48:00 PM

Excellent final line Bg.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Elaine George

Date: 10/11/2009 4:05:00 PM

A MASTERPIECE! To my fav's love, Lainie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/11/2009 6:10:00 AM

beautiful walk of peace! BG!... and thanks for congrats!... jim

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/9/2009 10:43:00 PM

I love this form.... Awesome write here Barbara.....:JP]

Marty Owens

Date: 10/9/2009 7:49:00 PM

Wow Barbara this is nice. Reminds me of walking on a mountain trail for some reason...Thanks for it...Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2009 6:53:00 PM

Sometimes when I am walking along the beach, I "air out" negative thoughts and emotions. In your woodland canopy, it appears you are able to do the same. This is a very healthy approach to life. Wish some of the troubled young souls could see the value of this catharsis. Very profound, LNC! Love you, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2009 5:47:00 PM

Many will relate to this kool Tetractys Barbara >> James

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/9/2009 5:29:00 PM

these times alone can are keen to clearing ones mind and gaining perspective in life........very nice Barb!