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Take watercolour peach, lavender blue a canvas morning sky, the clouds a frame, gilt treetops harvest fire, leaves brightly hued awakened now the arbor tips became. Lone footprints in the dew on virgin track save leaping of a brook or crossing stile, the journey was for now, no looking back just savouring a moment for a while. Beyond the Churchyard, entering the glade across the tired bridge with rusty nails, stream cuts its way through earth, a gentle blade, carved notches from my youth upon the rails. From here onward the footpath comes and goes it hides and peeks just like a timid child, in stretches bare, the place each walker knows and where a hedge gives choice it blossoms, wild. Now finally the sunrise takes a hold and burns away the morning's misty glaze the speckled droplets revel in their gold on bark and branches clothed in mossy baize. Adam's masterpiece comes into view Palladian and clad in smooth dressed stone beyond, the bridge where Cutler Brook runs through where ends this walk since childhood I have known. Switch on the phone and head for home again thus ends these precious hours of feeling sane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/19/2016 5:28:00 AM
This nostalgic piece warmed my heart Viv. You endow such lovely imagery in the special poem as to move me to put it in my faves! I love it! 7 ; )
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/19/2016 5:40:00 AM
Thanks, Connie, delighted you enjoyed it. One of those lovely things in life thats costs almost nothing. Except occasionally, new boots. Viv x
Date: 7/18/2016 3:27:00 PM
A stark image, putting on the phone and lose the hours of sanity after all the beauty you just painted. Wonderful!
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Date: 7/18/2016 9:59:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, a lovely walk in the early morning. Viv x
Date: 7/18/2016 6:26:00 AM
Except for last 2 lines you could be describing through eyes of D H Lawrence. Reading the white peacock. Description of English countryside amazing. Up with some of the masters my friend- well done. David
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Date: 7/18/2016 6:37:00 AM
I haven't read 'The white Peacock', but I understand it was inspired by a painting called 'an idyll'. I suppose that my walk has painted an idyllic picture which, I suppose in my eyes, it is. Thanks for the compliment, David. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/18/2016 3:51:00 AM
OH Mr Viv you painted such an incredible picture in my mind and brought back so so many memories for me - its an amazing sight when you see the building for the first time - wow love this write my friend I feel quite emotional reminiscing:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 7/18/2016 6:02:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I like to think that, in the event of a mega lotto win, should I move abroad I shall always have a jam jar full of change to come back and revisit things such as this I would miss. Viv x

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