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Written on 6th March 2025.
The most peaceful time of day is just before sunrise when you are alone and have the whole world to yourself. Quote by poet.
At dawn I went for a stroll along the lonely beach, waves were lapping gently on the pebbly shoreline. Then there it was before me a golden orb; sunrise.

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Date: 3/31/2025 11:11:00 AM
Love this! I can just hear the beach and feel the ambiance in spirit!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/31/2025 12:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Karen, Often when I went on holiday I'd be up at 04.00 and go for a walk, had the whole beach to myself, years of shift work have put my body clock out of sync lol. Tom
Date: 3/10/2025 5:20:00 PM
Tom, you're making me smile a lot with this latest batch of poems in praise of a bit of solitude with nature. We are indeed very small but have the ability to see a great deal.
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Date: 3/11/2025 12:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke, I love being with family and friends but also love those alone moments to just reflect and take in everything around me, be it the beach or the countryside. Tom
Date: 3/10/2025 10:37:00 AM
Back again with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful beach write and quote again. Wish I was on your beach watching the sunrise and water. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/10/2025 11:30:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Paula, me too summer can't come quick enough. Hope you have a lovely week ahead.
Date: 3/9/2025 1:59:00 PM
;-) Such a lovely write, Tom. I'm glad it was rewarded.
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Date: 3/9/2025 11:15:00 PM
Thank you very much for your return visit Lin, left title as it was as a reminder, read the rules twice lol Tom
Date: 3/9/2025 1:56:00 PM
Tom, this is beautiful and peaceful, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest.
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Date: 3/9/2025 11:14:00 PM
Thank you very much Tania, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/7/2025 11:26:00 PM
Tom such a beauty in your three lines with spectacular imagery. A wonderful submission for Constance Contest. Best wishes my friend I have a feeling this will place very high...
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Michael Tor
Date: 3/8/2025 1:30:00 PM
Tom it still was spectacular my friend you too enjoy your weekend with your lovely wife...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/8/2025 12:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael, I'm happy you enjoyed it. I was happy with the poem but dropped a clanger with the title, it should have been only three words, you live and learn. Have a great weekend. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 11:07:00 PM
This stroll through the sea strand, early in the morning is a joyful experience. Watching sunrise from a beach makes it even more wonderful. Beautifully composed three liner. All the Best dear Tom.
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Date: 3/6/2025 11:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Valsa, nothing beats it, the peace you feel is exhilarating. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 12:16:00 PM
Only 3 lines was needed Tom, you’ve said all that needs saying, any more would be too much, quote is quite powerful too, I can only see a 1st place in the contest, cheers David
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Date: 3/6/2025 12:36:00 PM
Thank you very much David, nothing beats it, my body clock is well out of sync, getting up at 03.00 or 04.00 is normal for me lol. Hope you're having a good week. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 11:00:00 AM
Hi Tom, I will be walking along the beach in the morning at Hemsby.
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Date: 3/6/2025 12:34:00 PM
Sounds bliss John, hope you're having a lovely break. Weather has been good so far. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 10:55:00 AM
The beach early in the morning is wonderful. I feel such zen there. I love children, but I want to hear the waves instead, at that hour. I read my paper, never my phone, a coffee beside me and warm sand to sit on, what a lovely way to start the day,peace, beauty and tranquility. Your poem brought back nice memories. for me. I enjoyed it's imagery so much. All day I will think of your words as I look out the window at another snowy day.
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Date: 3/6/2025 12:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Marikate, there's no better place to be, I'm always up before the lark and it's even more peaceful, just looking around and taking it all in. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 10:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful beach write and quote with a great picture. On the beach at sunrise is heavenly. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 3/6/2025 10:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula, great minds think alike, wishing you good lucj too. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 6:18:00 AM
Nice! Like your quote! It is like a moment of beautiful hope for the day, the birds concur, the sun’s buttons popping from its shirt! Hugs
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/6/2025 7:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim, love to hear the dawn chorus too, I would have mentioned the seagulls, but we could only write 3 lines. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 5:50:00 AM
Tom, such wonderful words to start my day. Like you, it is my favorite time of day.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/6/2025 7:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Jerry, the lie in brigade don't know what they're missing.lol Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 3:28:00 AM
Your poem is a delicate picture that stirs the soul. I wrote a three liner but not for the contest.
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Date: 3/6/2025 3:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, a view that never ceases to lift my spirits. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 3:21:00 AM
I love to watch the sunrise and wait for the birds to awake to the new dawn. First one, and then the whole tree full breaks into excited cheerful greetings to the new day! I used to live near the San Francisco Bay as a child, it was beautiful and peaceful as well as safe way back then in the early to mid-sixties. I witnessed sunsets over the Pacific Ocean, but never once had I seen the sunrise. Still, I love to see that golden orb rise over the mountains here in the SW desert, it is beautiful.
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Date: 3/6/2025 3:35:00 AM
Thank you very much BJ, they are the wonders of creation that I never get tired of seeing. I know exactly what you mean, the sunrise over the mountains, first you have a deep red sky then a tiny bead of light that rises into a golden orb bringing forth the start of a new day. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 2:22:00 AM
Dear Tom, Ah i dont know for some reason i feel the opposite when i see sunrise usually, but after reading this, i think next time i see a sunrise ill appreciate it more and feel happier that we are given a chance to live dream and just be, another day. You do these short poems so well too, i love the quote! So profound! And i love also the picture and your three lines! Best wishes always. Sending you light always
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/6/2025 2:44:00 AM
Thank you very much IE, I'm happy you enjoyed it, it's a scene I never get tired of looking at. I always see it as the birth of a new day and wonder what challenges it will bring. I've seen hundreds over the years, I can't lie in like some can, I have to get up and not burn daylight lol. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 1:58:00 AM
Tom, you know I treasure each golden sunrise like you do. Just me, Dawn, and the birds who serenade us. Great entry!
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/6/2025 3:05:00 AM
I know exactly what you mean, Tom. It's the same with me when I remember how many stars filled the sky when I lived in Colorado. I can't see them anymore... such is the problem with city lights.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/6/2025 2:09:00 AM
Thank you Lin, because of work my body clock is set to 04.00, even when I'm away I have to get up, but the benefits are amazing sunrises, when I was in Turkey I used watch it rise over the mountains, those moments stay with you forever. Tom
Date: 3/6/2025 1:41:00 AM
- Beautiful ... this is a beautiful moment - the silence of the sea and the wide horizon :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day, Tom :) - hugs
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/6/2025 2:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne Lise, I hope you do too, clear blue sky here, spring is definitely on the way. Tom

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