A Virtue That Embodies One Soul

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A silent whisper enters the ocean's mist cured from the spiced waves faraway gulls sing murmurs echo once upon a pearl held inside the shell You came to me a vision filled with beauty it was there I made a promise that crowned the gift forever in the heart No treasure ever came close to measure remaining loyal faithful to your love it was their that this soul found peace hidden in the stars of night freedom shines

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Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2019 7:51:00 AM

such a beautiful poem, one can feel the depths of love....i love this :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2019 4:23:00 AM

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/27/2019 4:18:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Just dazzling!All so very beautifully penned!Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly love it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive n' very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2019 3:52:00 AM

- Your poem shines off passion, romance and beauty Liam :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)