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A Violent Storm

A Violent Storm It starts with dying leaves that litter lawns All tumbled over in remorseless wind Until at last, defeated, they collect Behind the garden wall in tattered piles, Discarded on a bleak deserted street An empty cola can goes rattling past Entrapped and powerless it bowls along Its tinny clatter masked by mounting gale. The clouds, as dark and grey as battleships Amassed in fury, scud across the sky Unleashing hail like bullets pounding earth As scornful weather reaches boiling point And branches, ripped asunder, turn and toss Upon the lake that churns and boils with wrath The hardy waterbirds, they hide in reeds But where will tiny humming birds be safe? As nature, wields her power, strength and might. The storm, a deluge o’er the land has spread To soak the fields so long deprived of rain Endowing thirsty soil with healing wealth Iambic pentameter for Deborah's contest

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Date: 3/1/2010 6:10:00 AM
congrats on the win!! Enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:06:00 PM
Hey forgot to say congrats. I knew it was a shoe in!!
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Date: 2/18/2010 4:49:00 AM
Much kudos to you, Margaret, for participating in the “Mission Impossible! Blank Verse Brain Tease” Contest sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi. Entering was a challenging process. But you WON too with the beautiful description of nature's fury and purpose! Congratulation! Drum Rolls!!! Yippee! I am happy for you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:18:00 PM
What a wonderful poem, and beautifully done in this difficult contest!! You should be bursting with pride over this gem, Margaret! Congratulations! Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:09:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on your first place win in the Mission Impossible contest .. a wonderful write and a wonderful win to enjoy.. from a wonderful poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:02:00 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win. Great imagery and great poem! -Mike
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Date: 2/17/2010 3:40:00 PM
Creative use of imagery for an artistic view. Congratulations on placing first in Deborah's contest. Enjoy your wonderful honor. I wish you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 2/17/2010 3:32:00 PM
LVery nicely done. Congratulations Joyce
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Date: 2/5/2010 12:50:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Margaret.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 2/4/2010 5:20:00 PM
great job, I am still trying to get this one done. It took me awhile to understand iambic pentameter.
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Date: 2/4/2010 12:47:00 PM
you took this storm like a real artest. very well done the discriptions are great and rhythm in time.very well done. John H Loving III
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Date: 2/4/2010 12:04:00 PM
EXCELLENT meter and who needs rhyme when one can write like this,using the marvelous song like rhythm of iambic, that's what I say!!! This is smooth as satin, Margaret, and an awesome entry. I love finding people who can write this way. LUv, andrea ps I am so happy you liked my home maker poem!
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