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Feb. 8, 2021

Inspired by winter's magic: snow glorious snow, creating a fantasy world where there is pause and peace.

A View From My Window

A View From My Window

                                 Perched high above the tree line
                                             A lofty place to be,
                                     A birds-eye view of roof tops
                                        And smoking chimney's.

                                 Rising higher than the eye can see,
                                        Spiral rings take flight,
                                     Riding on the playful wind,
                              Like string-less kites; vanish out of sight.

                                    A sleepy village awakens
                                 To a blanket of pristine snow,
                                 Gaily glazing abandoned fields,
                                   Where flowers use to grow.

                                  Window panes are frosted
                                  In delicate scalloped lace,
                                Fences stand like sentinels,
                                   Wearing a bearded face.

                                 Clerical collars band wooden columns,
                                 Whose ledges are built of stone,
                                 And flirtatious flakes, congregate,
                                 A textured pattern all their own.

                                    Eaves, hard line edges,
                               Now swathed in frothy white,
                               A creamy marshmallow icing;
                               An illustrated, storybook delight.

                                 As daylight turns to dusk,
                             And street lamps begin to glow,
                             The drifting snow keeps rising,
                               With peace and calm below.
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Lee Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 1:45 PM
If only the world could stay at peace when the thaw comes..... Lovely read
Summers Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much. The imagery is very good as is the flow. John
Calasibetta Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Thank you John. I enjoyed writing this poem; have been snowbound, creating a great deal of time to reflect. Take Care, Paulette
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:24 PM
Ahh!! Great rhyme, rhythm, and flow to this one. It is very creative and descriptive work as well. I enjoyed reading it today. Snow in pictures, in movies, and on TV is very pretty but we are not prepared for it here in the south. I don't like to see it come but it does sometimes. Thanks for dropping by my page and leaving a nice comment. Sara
Calasibetta Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you. Living in the Northeast we experience a lot of snow and I have learned to love it, especially when I don't have to drive in it; I just enjoy the pause and the serenity. Take care.
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Window planes with lace, fences with bearded fences, Creamy marshmallow icing. So wonderfully you have described snowfall. An absolute delight to read. I have seen pictures and videos of snow and I feel peace and calm every time I see them. God bless! Take care Rama
Calasibetta Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Dear Rama, Thank you for stopping in to read my poem. I am happy that the imagery delighted you, truly, the snow is magical; perhaps one day will experience the serenity of snow. God Bless you too!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 7:49 PM
Lovely imagery!
Calasibetta Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Thank you Kim. I enjoy writing in imagery form, it is like creating a painting, a visual in words.
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