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A Very Silent Night .

Santa omitted to visit our town Christmas Day was so sad ; all the kiddies let down . Parents were livid and they all could remember That letters were sent in early November . No dolls prams or buggies or nice , brand new clothes Transformers or train sets , skates or GI Joes. Just what had happened to cause this great blunder. It wreaked havoc and chaos ; tore families asunder . No new dvds or Ipods to tune . No bikes or small trikes to clutter the room . So what happened Rudolf and his big radar nose To guide him on roof-tops ; nobody knows . Seems , he went on the razz , 2 days before " Eve " . Got a chill in his nose , so we believe , And lost all scent of direction ; the great stupid berk . The excuse , we got was - " his sat-nav don't work " . !!! Inspired by Carolyn's Christmas home-town contest .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/14/2010 11:03:00 PM
And also, I think the economy had something to do with it. GRRRRR. Good one, Sean, and I am glad I got down far enough now to see this one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/25/2010 6:29:00 PM
I love this poem . Thank you for your comment. (post)
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Date: 1/2/2010 4:55:00 PM
So this is what you've been up to lately, messing with the reindeer. Have a HAPPY NEW YEAR Sean. Vince
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:25:00 PM
Excellent Sean in your very typical style - just saw it now Déirdre
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Date: 12/18/2009 9:43:00 PM
Very Irish Sean and brilliant , funny! Well done. David
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Date: 12/15/2009 3:48:00 AM
Lol. Thanks for that Sean. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/8/2009 5:55:00 AM
LOL wonderful write here, Sean ... think you mean "jerk" in the next to last line ... smile ... I really see a children's book with this one ... hope you have a wonderful holiday and a great 2010 !!
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Date: 12/7/2009 7:19:00 AM
This was fun to read! Great write, Sean! Congratulations on you win in Carolyn's contest! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:40:00 PM
Kool poem Sean, made me chuckle big style, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:23:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Carolyn's contest Sean.rgds Brian
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:41:00 PM
Very funny. Lcongratulations on your suceess in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:04:00 PM
Sean, you've cleverly illustrated here why you're one of my favorite poets. Witty, witty boy! Hugs and congrats! Donna
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:05:00 PM
Congrats, Sean, on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest.. well deserved win.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/29/2009 1:01:00 PM
LOL That's too funny, Sean. You are one of the HUMOR KINGS!!! (Not just a footle king) I always enjoy your work. Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 11/28/2009 4:44:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading...Good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 11/26/2009 7:48:00 AM
Happy thanskgiving, but don't get too Happy! LOL
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Date: 11/26/2009 12:03:00 AM
Best wishes Sean(& to your team at the weekend)Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome omments & kind words today.
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Date: 11/25/2009 10:56:00 AM
I feel like Santa now.... Awesome write friend....:JP]
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Date: 11/25/2009 4:31:00 AM
Such fasinating writing I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and heart with us todaySean. Wishing you the best in the contest. I wish you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. May your writings inspire others to write from their hearts as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2009 6:31:00 PM
This is fun Christmas story to read, cute and well written with great rhyming. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 11/24/2009 5:21:00 PM
funny, hope it is a better year!!
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Date: 11/24/2009 2:19:00 PM
i loved this poem Sean,indeed sweet--Charma
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Date: 11/24/2009 1:28:00 PM
A great narrative with much humor, Sean! Thanks for supporting the contest. Have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2009 1:00:00 PM
Neat Christmas poem Sean. God's bess, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/24/2009 12:24:00 PM
Hello Sean....it's fun to see your sense of humor is back on the soup!! Such a fun poem! ~ Good luck in the contest! ~ Love, Carrie
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