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A Universe Between

I found a universe between our eyes And there is where I touched gentle romance A pause that lingered, was of no surprise This heart confirmed every look and glance When I close my mind's eye, I still see you A beckoning smile to replace the space And around your eyes a soft colored hue To light the moment and enhance your face Should my heart require shelter from a storm I will find its entrance where eyes confess A place to turn to and see a fire form This universe no better place to rest In pause that lingered, I found your eyes pure And the universe between, it endures

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/22/2014 2:06:00 AM
Brilliant write and congrats on the win, Frederic
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Date: 4/21/2014 10:01:00 PM
ONCE AGAIN, HELLO, FREDERIC, Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time in supporting my contest... Always & Forever *Linda
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Date: 2/8/2014 8:17:00 PM
OH my gosh, finally a guy who knows how to do a GREAT love sonnet. Well, I have seen a few here at soup, but not too many. This is a big FAVE!!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/9/2014 12:24:00 PM
for that I thank you and with a quick tip of the hat leave a smile and graditude for your kindness

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