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A Twenty-Seven Hour Day

Wonder if I ask politely, the great powers that be Would increase the day's hours by just two or three Not asking for much My heart would be touched Right now there's not even time for a pee

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Date: 8/8/2020 3:11:00 PM
You have to make time to go to the pisser. If not things get wet very fast. Have a nice day Jack, and drink a little less water lol.
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Michael Tor
Date: 8/8/2020 8:17:00 PM
Im there now Jack...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/8/2020 3:17:00 PM
Been counting lately how many time a times a day I need to go... it's too many! See what's ahead for you with age! :(
Date: 8/8/2020 8:23:00 AM
Careful what you wish for... I wouldn’t put it past man to disrupt the earth’s spin. ;), Good 24hr hugs! xomo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/8/2020 12:56:00 PM
The hours go round and round but everything stays the same! Hmm disrupting earth's spin! Interesting! Lovesies, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 8/8/2020 4:47:00 AM
Haha, as we get older we need all the time we can get. Good day Sir Jack Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/8/2020 4:54:00 AM
So damn true!!! Everyone goes through it... Happy Saturday Tom!

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