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A Twenty-First Century Elegy

If there were a tomb to hold my thoughts alone where only those who seek it, meditate, guffaws would echo on the heavenly green; ideas will not live beyond their youth unless they catch the glint of steel beneath the torch of battle. So let now be the arena for my wars, my intellect, my flooding heart to charge at enemies who rise today but cannot raise the dust of my posterity. This very hour I choose to fight amid the phalanx of the white-robed clan. It is a field of bloodless strife where victors search beside themselves for ripening flaws to extricate, for keys to open doors that never should have closed, and for regrets that festered, unexposed. Then as a spirit leaves its body to embrace an unknown paradise, down at the end of that long corridor a dying candle flame blinks twice and gives its rising smoke to cense the larks above. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/10/2013 12:01:00 PM
don't know how to edit them? it's easy! just click on where it says 'my poems' and it will bring them all up, click on 'edit' beside the poem you want to alter, make the corrections, and then click 'update' at the bottom - sorted! :) butterfly <3
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/10/2013 1:58:00 PM
Thanks. Good to see you again! I'm trying to figure out how to message you....it has been so long since I have tried, here!
Date: 7/28/2013 3:22:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem poet excellent poem poet
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Date: 7/28/2013 4:27:00 AM
good morning Robert, stopping by to say hi thank you, and reading my poems I will be back later this afternoon. enjoy your Sunday. ...linda
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/28/2013 9:51:00 AM
looking forward to your comments
Date: 6/11/2013 3:46:00 PM
Thanks. I submitted no more after this one because I could not get the program to accept my submission And, I've forgotten how to make corrections! Sorry.
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Date: 6/11/2013 2:48:00 PM
This has a beautiful flow and message. There is an 'r' missing from 'for' in L3S3. SuZ
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/10/2013 2:00:00 PM
Charlotte just showed me how. Now I can fix the horrible errors! Thanks again. -Dean
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/28/2013 9:50:00 AM
Thank you. I still havn't figured out how to edit them
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Robert Ludden
Date: 6/11/2013 3:46:00 PM
SEE ABOVE

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