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A Trudge To Bethlehem and Nativity

On a bleak and frosty night Vexed and weary two travelers rode Along the pathways-craggy and ragged From Nazareth, trudging miles on end Full pregnant, was she with child Mary -the Virgin, suffused with Spirit Holy Divinely ordained to bear the Godly Prince Conceived before, she had known her spouse. Abiding in Heaven’s Providence n’ care They had rode past miles behind Far too fatigued by the trip Mary, now badly needed a place to rest. Heading towards the blinking lights Not far from the city’s guarded gate Joseph sighted a tavern-small Perched high on a tiny hill A sense of relief beamed past They have come at last to the journey’s end Finally found a place to rest! An interim home away from home Tethering the donkey outside the gate Joseph helped Mary alight the brute In eager search, he hurried inside With Mary, following with faltering steps. But the couple, to their dismay found Within the tavern, room, there was none For many a man had gathered round To halt there on that freezing night Sundry folk from surrounding lands Had reached Bethlehem for the yearly census Tradesmen selling clothes and cheese Nomads of varying clans and clime Petulant camels, braying donkeys The place was littered with man and beast. The tavern small, so packed to full Had no more space to harbor the crowd Mary and Joseph, though dejected, Were encamped within a manger- warm With tender concern, Joseph joked, To ease the strain on Mary’s face “Gaze upon this palace of gold Where a son shall soon be born to us”! Mary smiled a gentle smile, Humored by her husband’s jest Under the gaze of tethered hosts In veiled privacy of the midnight gloom She gave birth to a radiant child, The great Redeemer to all Mankind The star studded sky suddenly glowed With a rare brilliance never beheld And a celestial voice trailed along Delivering ‘tidings of joy’ to the globe around 20, December 2021 Nativity New poems Poetry Contest Sponsor- Eve Roper

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Date: 1/20/2022 2:48:00 PM
Valsa, you added such creativity to your Christmas story! Well done! Congrats on your placement! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/19/2022 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "A Trudge to Bethlehem and Nativity" is a wonderful story/write. I really enjoyed it. Have a blessed day......................
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Date: 1/18/2022 8:52:00 PM
Great work. Long one too. There's fluency of narration . Congratulations!
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Date: 1/18/2022 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa , and congratulations on your win. Bless you with a new year with lots of blessings.
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Date: 12/22/2021 6:58:00 AM
Valsa, you have created an outstanding piece of poetry. This story is divine in the eyes of devotees, and your eloquent words, have brilliantly communicated it.
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:56:00 PM
Your kind words are ever appreciated dear Lasaad ! Tons of gratitude!
Date: 12/21/2021 5:41:00 PM
Lovely retelling of the Christmas story. It is the reason for the season. beautifully written, Valsa. Good luck in the contest. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:53:00 PM
Thanks Bill, for your appreciation of the poem and your wishes of good luck ! Love and Greetings !
Date: 12/21/2021 4:08:00 PM
You brought some human feelings to the story. Well penned....Christmas Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:51:00 PM
Debra.... you are a sweet heart ! Thanks lot ! Christmas and New Year Greetings !
Date: 12/21/2021 10:37:00 AM
I enjoyed that you gave Joseph a sense of humor, I am sure it helped to ease Mary’s fears. Have a beautiful Christmas my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:50:00 PM
I feel that Joseph had an innate sense of humor, though the Bible doesn't say so. That's why he wasn't greatly perturbed any time, even while passing through severe ordeals . Thanks a lot dear Connie !
Date: 12/21/2021 9:50:00 AM
You captured the Nativity event with your great verse. Truly you're becoming one of the best poetess on the soup. Greetings.
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:46:00 PM
This is indeed a wonderful compliment.... ! I feel humbled ! Thanks a lot sweet friend !
Date: 12/21/2021 9:47:00 AM
A true poetic ic work of art, Valsa. This should be a POTD So glad you are part of This site. Love, Panagiota
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:44:00 PM
I feel greatly elated by your comment and thanks a lot Panagiota ! Glad I could become part of this site with wonderful poets like you .
Date: 12/21/2021 9:31:00 AM
A story so divine to the heart of the faithful-- so wonderfully illustrated through your articulate words, Valsa. You bring alive the scenes that led to joyous celebration of birth. Kudos to you for your gifted pen.
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:42:00 PM
Learning from all of you . With wonderful poets around, much can be assimilated... Thanks a lot friend !
Date: 12/21/2021 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful poem on nativity. Long one too. Complete. Best wishes.
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Christuraj ! Have a blessed Christmas and New Year !
Date: 12/21/2021 9:14:00 AM
You tell the story of the nativity so well Valsa, Very well written and good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 12/25/2021 10:39:00 PM
Thank you so much ! Your words inspire me.

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