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A Tropical Portrait

canopy of blue
                                              adorned by white wispy clouds --
                                                          a heavenly day

                                                       palm tree sentinels
                                           watch ocean waves lap the shore --
                                                   white sand reveals shells

                                                        vibrant flora thrives
                                             shades of fuchsia, verdant green --
                                                          a paradise found



7/13/12 for Gail Doyle's "A Scenery of Your Choice,
                                       As an Artist" contest.

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Dan Kearley Date: 7/21/2012 11:07:00 AM Congrats on your win Kim,a very beautiful paradise is what I see when I read this... :o) One of those ~Aha~ moments you have given me... :o) Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 7/20/2012 1:14:00 PM You have painted a lovely tropical paradise, Kim. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 7/19/2012 1:00:00 PM congrats on your win Kim Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/19/2012 12:24:00 PM congrats Kim on a glorious first place win for this amazing scene of gracious imagery luv.. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/19/2012 11:38:00 AM well done Kim, I love each one..congrats. BG Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/18/2012 11:17:00 PM It sounds like an awesome place to be. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 7/18/2012 4:45:00 PM Big Congrats on your win Kim!!! lovely...very lovely!!! :) love ya, deb...hope all is well with you... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/18/2012 4:16:00 PM ((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/18/2012 10:50:00 AM Kim, congrats on your win, excellent..David Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/18/2012 9:54:00 AM Beautifully done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/18/2012 9:23:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Kim. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jonas L. Rozario Date: 7/14/2012 12:09:00 PM Oh wow this is really beautiful Kim...reads like a sure winner...awesome...all three of'em!!! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/14/2012 11:20:00 AM The best to you in Gail's contest Kim. Love, Carol Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 7/14/2012 10:22:00 AM A fine portrait of nature for sure, Kim!! Jag Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/13/2012 5:47:00 PM Gorgeous picture you have painted in words. Love it!! Hugs Michael Login to Reply

Gail Debole Date: 7/13/2012 5:45:00 PM Hi Kim - This is definitely where I would like to be now...your paradise! Beautiful strong imagery. - Gail Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 7/13/2012 5:29:00 PM Nice triple helping of tropical haiku. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 7/13/2012 4:55:00 PM This is a wonderful paradise you have penned here Kim! I enjoyed your creativity you have shown so eloquently within this write! Your descriptions add a complete image in my mind, a beautiful sight! This is a spectacular poem! Great Work!! Login to Reply