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A Tropical Paradise

Up, up, and away to an enchanted land Where palm trees wave to gentle breezes The golden sun’s rays are never banned Up, up, and away to an enchanted land Where surf is up; and the skin is tanned, And you can relax, doing whatever pleases Up, up, and away to an enchanted land Where palm trees wave to gentle breezes. written June 9, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/11/2021 11:44:00 AM

This sounds like an enchanted land! Wow! Great job!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/11/2021 12:05:00 PM

Pure fantasy, too. I don't think there is such a place in real life.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/10/2021 5:14:00 AM

Good Morning L Milton - May the palm tress always wave and may we always be blessed to be in the realm of enchanted lands and paradise. You poetry is wonderful. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy poetry soup.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/10/2021 8:09:00 AM

Thanks so much, Lisa, for your warm, thoughtful comments to my poem.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/9/2021 5:43:00 PM

Book me a motel there for two weeks, will you. Palm trees and fresh breeze. Can't wait. I need a break!! ~ Just dreamin'

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/9/2021 6:50:00 PM

Hey, I figure my niece would take you in for two weeks. I sat on the veranda and wrote poetry. They know how strange I can be. Took me to a seafood place and an Italian place with piano player. I was in heaven...but had to come home. Still dreamin'.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/9/2021 1:02:00 PM

A wonderful and picturesque triolet, Milton! Blessings, Kim M

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/9/2021 1:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim, for your warm and thoughtful comment on my poem.