A Train Full of Dreams

Looking for adventure and escape, a young girl's thinking of skipping school. And a case of spring-fever finds her skirting the edge of town, acting cool. Sharp as a whip, she heads for a curve in the tracks where the train must slow down. And with her spot well-chosen, she waits behind some bushes outside of town. Suddenly, she hears the train coming, with its high-pitched squeal of steel on steel. And her heart begins beating wildly, each clinking clank fueling her zeal. With its wheels screeching and sparks flying, a humongous engine lumbers by. And she looks for an open boxcar, aware, with one wrong step, she could die. Racing alongside gives her a thrill, for the train is still moving quite fast. And matching its speed, she pumps her legs, with bravado not felt in the past. Fighting fatigue, she pushes onward, not letting her pain get in the way. And chugging along, picking up speed, a train full of dreams whisks her away. (Quatrain) 7/29/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Great poem. Love it. Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:28 PM
Back to let you know this was a very good piece had to read it again. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your genuine support. Emile.
Horne Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 5:04 PM
wonderful write, my friend
Pinet Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Thanks Jack, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Roper Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Fascinating piece, Emile, you captured a little girls dream a 7 and good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Smith Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Very nice write Emile. You captured the essence of the girl reaching for her dreams
Pinet Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Thanks so much Tim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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