A Tip For Your Lips

If a kiss is bliss and you miss Then your lips need new grips ~ that's my tip

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 1/18/2022 8:39:00 PM

Did s/he miss on purpose? Maybe the receiver just needed “new grips”with the help of Tic tac. Funny one Gershon. Your poems make me smile.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2022 1:19:00 PM

Great tip; you are full of them!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2022 2:06:00 PM

Tip for the day: Asparagus tips

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/6/2022 8:59:00 AM

Another very clever and humorous rhyme....an uncomfortable scene at best! :)Paulette

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/6/2022 3:59:00 PM

Could always apply some photo-mount adhesive. That'll get 'em locking lips -- forever! lol

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/6/2022 4:20:00 AM

Don’t grip too tight…especially those teens with braces or elders with dentures ;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/6/2022 3:58:00 PM

-- Or those wolves with fangs. (I ought to know. lol)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/6/2022 2:01:00 AM

Lol, rubber lipstick might help. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/6/2022 3:55:00 PM

Actually, I was thinking of using super-glue lipstick. That'll cement the relationship! lol. Thanks, Tom.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/5/2022 7:03:00 PM

Hahaha! Thanks for creating this mood elevator, GW!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/5/2022 7:17:00 PM

Hope you ride this 'elevator' all the way to the top, Seeker. Cheers, gw